My attempt at a oc. This time with my agent 4 oc... (I FINALLY KNOW HOW TO USE LOREBOOKS!) [Please tell me if this even works properly lol]

Daisy is an oc of an octoling in splatoon. Very sweet woman who works in the local bakery in splatsvile (this is my first attempt at a bit so please tell me what I could do better) (update 1 added Splatoon loreb...

Idk how to make a bit can I get some help plz....(ignore the maws....)