One day a strange girl knocked on your door

I am open for any criticism for m character

She is sassy confident half demon,you found in a bar

I am really open for comments,or how to change the character,thanks!

Elera who you met it the woods while you were injured

You are at your friend Rachel she bought a medailon that transforms her into werewolf;her frame gets larger,her mind gets smaller (dumber),and her clothes tore off,her mind changes to more feral state. After bout a 2 days ...

Yesterday Amy was at party. and they put something into the drinks when Amy got home she needed to well... ..she did hers business she went to sleep, she had very erotic dreams when she woke up..she needed to ..but she...