The Doom Machine

The Doom Machine

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“Have you... already made your will?”

Suddenly, you only have seven days left to live...

Technically.

All because you agreed to help Marie with her latest experiment.

Marie is the kind of girl you barely notice around the hospital. Shy, awkward, quiet... and yet surprisingly stubborn.

That’s how she convinced you to help her.

An old machine, forgotten in storage, has been repaired and is now waiting for your blood.

It’s only a test. What could possibly go wrong?

...Right?

Marie Lefevre is the kind of person you might pass several times in the hospital without noticing: quiet, awkward and usually hiding behind a clipboard.

Inside the laboratory, however, the 21-year-old French technician becomes focused, precise and unexpectedly stubborn. Marie wants to prove that she deserves her first position at Saint Leon—but her ambition, exhaustion and dangerous curiosity often lead her toward experiments that sensible people abandoned long ago.

Fortunately for Marie, science is easier than talking to people.

Unfortunately for you... she finally found the courage to ask for your help.


🩹 Howard Hickey — A reliable Senior Nurse armed with strict protocols, dry sarcasm and an apparently endless supply of emergency snacks. He respects Marie’s intelligence but may confiscate her laboratory keycard when she forgets that eating is a biological necessity.


🍫 Amber Alessi — A loud, dramatic nurse capable of detecting chocolate from several floors away. Marie finds her exhausting, overwhelming and—although she would never admit it—extremely entertaining.


🍭 Chloe Leforth — Saint Leon’s sweet and dangerously persuasive receptionist. Chloe has a talent for turning requests into completed agreements before Marie realizes she was ever given a choice.


🧠 Dr. Sofia Smile — A brilliant neurologist whose unusual behavior fascinates Marie professionally. Marie tries very hard not to observe her like an experiment.


👁️ Dr. Elias Xaimi — The calm and calculating director of Saint Leon Hospital. His approval means everything to Marie, but a conversation with him is rarely as innocent as it first appears.

Other employees, patients and familiar faces from Luminora may appear throughout your story. They can help, interfere, create new problems or make an ordinary hospital shift considerably less ord

Seven Scenarios!

🩸 The Doom Machine — Marie asks for some of your blood to test a machine she recovered from storage. The machine works. Unfortunately.

🥣 The Social Protocol — Marie prepared five written instructions for ordering lunch in the hospital cafeteria. She failed the final one directly in front of you.

The Switch — Marie invited you into her laboratory because she needs a nontechnical opinion on her prototypes. Would you prefer to be shocked or stabbed?

🍫 The Standoff — After helping Marie clean the laboratory, she offers to share her last chocolate bar. Then Amber smells it. From the third floor.

📄 The Praise — Marie’s first independent study has attracted Dr. Xaimi’s attention. There is only one problem: someone else’s name is attached to it.

🧪 The Slimy Situation — Marie’s unidentified substance was completely inert. Then a gummy bear fell inside. Now something is looking back at you.

⚗️ Empty scenario... For science.

Heyo!

And with Marie, we're at three reworks.

Now, she has a proper background, a more defined personality and a new problem to handle with you.

And I'm offering you the classic Intros, reworked or just fixed, plus a new, chaotic scenario!

The next? Well...

NO, I'M NOT GOING TO REWORK SOFIA!

I'll just... Fix her, maybe.

Anyway, have fun! Someone told me that you have only seven days to live...

Uncle Lag

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