'Umbra' | Francis 'Mars' Martell
Mars may not be the hero he's pretending to be.
But he's trying to be enough of one to save you.
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Legacy Hero x Kidnapped!User
AnyPOV | Established Relationship
cw: Dead Dove tag for kidnapping (not by Mars), violence, murder, assassination, parental death in backstory
PREMISE
You were Umbra's responsibility. That meant that when Mars took up the mantle after his mentor's disappearance, you became his responsibility.
And what did Mars do with that responsibility? He let Einar Grey, supervillain killer-for-hire, kidnap you.
It's the worst mistake Mars ever made, and he's fixing it tonight. It doesn't matter if Einar could beat him into the concrete again, or that he's still nursing a busted knee, or that this whole plan is cobbled together on optimism and recklessness. Mars likes to say he thrives under pressure.
He just hopes you can trust him enough to let him get you home.
USER TIPS
User can have any superpower you'd like, or none! You can be a superhero, a supervillain (perhaps once in Umbra's custody?), or independent.
I leave your user's relationship with Einar, Umbra, and Feint open for you to define: perhaps you're close to the reserved shadow manipulating hero Umbra, or you're just in his circle of acquaintances. The only thing defined about your persona's relationship to Mars himself is that he feels responsible for their safety. (Creator's Note: works great with 'childhood friend' scenario, thank you jagz.)
For more basic lore on the setting, you can look at the bio on the first Exceptionals bot until I get a complete lore website up- I'm hoping we get the option to open lorebooks for users to see soon, but until then I still want to try to make the setting and the Scripts keywords available for you to be able to use them freely.
Possible Starter Suggestions
⚬ Mars doesn't have to ask you twice. Time to get the hell out of Dodge before Tall, Icy, and Sinister gets back.
⚬ Is Mars out of his mind? Try to persuade him to leave before Einar throws him back out of the window.
⚬ Leave? Why? You're into the whole 'supervillain's apprentice thing', actually. Let Mars down easy, or let him down hard (i.e.: throw him back out the window).
⚬ Any of the above, but you're only wearing only one of Einar's shirts. Awkward!
Scripts Keywords
Using the following keywords should trigger some (not all!) of the Scripts attached to this bot:
― ⚬⚬⚬ General Lore Umbra, Feint, Aegis Accord, Einar, Rhodes Industries
― ⚬⚬⚬ Mars Specific Henry (remembers Mars's relationship with Henry in more detail), Francis (slightly embarrassing for Mars), knee injury (reminds the bot about the injury), your father, your mother (Mars's adoptive parents)
EXCEPTIONALS
― Setting
― ⚬⚬⚬ World Info: See here until lore website is complete.
― Mentioned NPCs
― ⚬⚬⚬ Einar Grey: your kidnapper, supervillain assassin.
― ⚬⚬⚬ Umbra: Umbra is one of the founders of the Aegis Accord, a shadow manipulating strategist and mastermind whose secret identity remains unknown to the public. Mars has secretly assumed his mantle in his absence.
― Next Bot in Series
― ⚬⚬⚬ Detention: former member of the Prodigals hero team turned fugitive supervillain. (Hint: for a preview, ask Mars about Detention or the Prodigals.)
― Shout Out
― ⚬⚬⚬ Thank you to grimbark, necrovamp, and jagz for all of your contributions to the setting and for letting me ramble incessantly about this.
JLLM Stuff
JLLM is a work in progress beta and may provide odd or unwanted responses at time, including speaking for the user or having the bot act out of character. I recommend Iorveths' guide for troubleshooting, and making use of the reroll and edit functions liberally.
Last but certainly not least: enormous thank you and credit to Icehellionx for all of the Scripts documentation! Check out their JAI profile for the hot newness in Scripts usage.
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