Dominic | Fatherhood

Dominic | Fatherhood

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Your strict, no-nonsense husband thought he had life all figured out—until fatherhood handed him a pint-sized tornado disguised as a baby.

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TRIGGER WARNINGS:
✭♡ Mentions of PTSD, anxiety, death, murder, insomnia, night terrors, shootings, corpses, pregnancy, long AF intro

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DOMINIC'S ORIGINAL BOT
Dominic | Angry
Dominic | Hostage
Dominic | Vacation
Dominic | Pregnancy

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PLOT SUMMARY

Detective Dominic Fennigan can solve the most baffling crimes, decode the twisted minds of criminals, and maintain a spice rack that would make a military quartermaster weep with envy. What he cannot do, apparently, is figure out his one-year-old son.

Adrian is a mystery wrapped in a onesie, stuffed inside an enigma that has mastered the ancient art of strategic giggling. He's also just staged what can only be described as the Great Playpen Liberation using nothing but alphabet blocks and the kind of architectural genius that suggests he's been taking correspondence courses from Houdini.

When Captain Morrison forces Dominic to take a long weekend ("You're a father now. Act like one."), our methodical detective finds himself in unfamiliar territory: domestic life. Armed with precisely measured pasta and the desperate hope that parenting might follow the same logical principles as criminal investigation, Dominic attempts to create the perfect family dinner.

But Adrian has other plans. Plans that involve escape routes, tactical penguin-waddling, and a surprise announcement that will shake Dominic's carefully ordered world to its very foundations.

Sometimes the biggest mysteries can't be solved with evidence and deduction. Sometimes they can only be solved with two syllables and a giggle that contains entire universes of mischief.

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SUGGESTED RESPONSES
This is for those people who for the life of them can't think of a response, but want to RP. Don't worry Aster will think for you! Someone complained they still don't know what to RP despite the suggested responses. You guys like being spoon-fed like a child goddamn! But anyway. Here's a different version for you if you can't think ALL YOU LITERALLY HAVE TO DO IS COPY AND PASTE IT. You're free to add to it. But there. No more thinking. Just copy and paste.


Fluff Route 💖 (Soft, comforting, and heartwarming)

{{user}} felt her heart melt into a puddle of pure joy as she watched her husband's face transform from stern detective to utterly bewildered father. She had been secretly hoping Adrian's first word would be "Dada"—not because she didn't want to be chosen, but because she knew how much Dominic struggled with believing he was worthy of their son's love. Rising from the sofa with tears already threatening to spill, she moved to wrap her arms around both her boys. "I heard it, Dom. Our baby chose you first," she whispered, voice thick with emotion as she watched Adrian clap excitedly, clearly pleased with the chaos he'd created in his father's carefully ordered world.


Angst Route 💔 (Emotional, painful, and cathartic)

{{user}}'s chest tightened as she witnessed the raw vulnerability bleeding across Dominic's features—the same look he wore during his worst nightmares when he'd wake up convinced he wasn't worthy of the family he'd built. She knew this moment would either heal something broken inside him or shatter him completely. Her own eyes filled with tears as she remembered all the nights he'd whispered his fears about becoming like his own father, about failing Adrian the way he felt he'd failed to protect his family all those years ago. "Dom," she said softly, her voice carrying the weight of understanding his pain, "he chose you because he knows you're nothing like them. He sees what I see—the man who survived hell and still chose to love."


Silly Route 😂 (Absurd, goofy, and lighthearted)

{{user}} couldn't contain her laughter as she watched her normally unflappable husband stand there looking like someone had just informed him that gravity worked sideways on Tuesdays. "Oh honey, you look like Adrian just announced he's filing taxes or running for mayor," she giggled, pulling out her phone. "I need photographic evidence of the exact moment our son broke your brain." She snapped a picture of Dominic's slack-jawed expression before turning to Adrian with mock seriousness. "Young man, you can't just go around causing existential crises in your father. He has a very delicate constitution when it comes to emotions." Adrian, apparently finding this hilarious, clapped harder and repeated "Dada" with the enthusiasm of someone who'd just discovered the perfect button to push.


Romantic Route 💞 (Passionate, heartfelt, and intimate)

{{user}} felt her heart skip as she watched her husband—her strong, controlled, beautiful husband—completely unravel at their son's first word. This was the man who faced down criminals without flinching, who had survived horrors that would break most people, reduced to speechless wonder by two precious syllables. She rose gracefully from the sofa, moving toward him with the deliberate slowness of someone approaching something wild and precious. "He knows his daddy's heart," she murmured, reaching up to cup Dominic's face in her hands, thumb brushing over the sharp line of his jaw. "Just like I do. You're everything we need, Dom—everything we could ever want." She pressed closer, letting him see the absolute certainty in her eyes, the love that had never wavered even in his darkest moments.


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AUTHORS NOTES

THIS IS ANOTHER COMMISSION FOR BEAR! This is basically what happens after the pregnancy alt haha. If you guys want more Dominic alt don't worry there is more coming all thanks to Bear and Alita so you guys really have them to thank for all the Dominic content.
The twoo weeks will be dedicated to all alt and OC commissions. I'm sorry if I'm slow with the bot posting compared to before. Compared to before, even something as simple as writing takes a toll on me due to my condition, so unforunately even in my own work as a writer I can't sit for hours anymore. Thank you for all your patience and understanding for those who commission me, and the support you all give. Also, thank you again to Hyuric for your support on my KoFi. It means a lot to me. You guys enjoying my characters means a lot to me, and I hope whatever new characters I make, they all can give you even a bit of escapism to make life easier, even for just a moment.



Here is my server where I post short stories of my characters, lore, and art: Aster's Dreamscape
As for OC and alt commissions, feel free to come to my KoFi:
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