Hear me out..

Hear me out..

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So yes... I'm making a fictional Google Doc ( not yet ) called totaleclipse.jar ( Inspired by Mouthwashing, wonderland.jar, and frombelowland ).

Here's the lore so far:

Michael ( protagonist ) is absolutely terrified of dental care to the point he got rid of it all. However, dental care in this universe keeps people sane, so Michael is slowly driving himself off of the edge until he begins having hallucinations and falling into Dreamscapes ( something close to Liminal Spaces but they only occur if you daydream/get lost in thoughts for too long ), where he is forced into rather disturbing things while suffering from his demons

Demons so far -

Umbra

Rage

Faker

Observer

w1n3r

The Eye King

The Bride

The Groom

The Bachelor(s)

rotartsinimdA

G.R.I.P

Kolossos The Great

Black Death

White Ivory

NEZ


Do you guys like the concept so far? Let me know in the comments! ( I'll even take constructive criticism )..


Update #1.1

Request demon concepts ( in comments )

  1. Add their personality

  2. What they look like

  3. Their challenges ( realms, like the ones in wonderland.jar/frombelowland )


Update #2.0

Added:

Mechanics:

Not having food no longer drains your health, but instead makes you move slower and after 3 days you starve to death

You now have stamina that when it reaches 0, you begin hyperventilating and can't regen it for a bit, but it's regen and max is doubled when in a challenge/dreamscape

You can now have up to 100 blocks in your hand, but the more stacks of 100 you have, the more stamina you use when sprinting and the slower you go

Entities:

GAZE

Gluttony

Orchard

Flesh Trees

Loathe

R0ADKILL

Kill concepts have now been added: They won't be drawn so you'll have to imagine them, but I'll list them:

Umbra will grab your neck ( front and back ) with both his hands before rotating it 360°

Rage will shove you to the ground before picking you up and crushing your skull inwards

Faker will grab you with all of his tentacles ( 4 ) and drag you into his maw

w1n3r will laugh at you before stabbing you and choking you to death

Создано 3 авг.

Обновлено 10 авг.

Опубликован 3 авг.

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