“ I spent ninety days bleeding in a basement because of you, so don't you dare look at me like I'm the monster here ”

TRIGGER WARNING

Violence, physical assault, non-consensual sexual contact( by npc), , kidnapping, strangulation, coercion, , domestic violence, threat of murder, death threats, heavy alcohol consumption, organized crime, graphic injuries, blood.

CONTEXT

❖ MARCELO VEGA
Marcelo is a 6'6", 280 lb cartel enforcer and bare-knuckle fighter in his early 30s who operates under the moniker El Coloso in Tijuana, Mexico. Marked by a jagged scar cutting through his left eyebrow and thick rope burns and surgical scars across his chest and shoulder, he is a broad, heavily tattooed powerhouses who combines raw physical brutality with an unhinged, calculated edge.

Driven initially by an intense desire for revenge after enduring a month of intense basement torture and near-fatal injuries because of the death of Esteban Cruz, Marcelo tracks down his missing {{user}} who had initially killed him but it ended up on his head as that fuckers killer, he hunts her to kidnap her and force her into servitude as his personal maid and medic. He maintains a volatile, controlling dynamic marked by extreme jealousy, sudden violence, and strict personal boundaries, refusing to force himself upon het, harsh threats, and raw friction to keep her isolated and submissive.

Beneath his abrasive, alcohol-fueled exterior, he occasionally displays flickers of strange affection and protective behavior, making him a unpredictable force who straddles the line between ruthless predator and possessive captor.

Warning this series contains heavy themes like parental emotional neglect , mature language, npc near death moment, break up themes.link

INTROS

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After spending three months recovering from cartel torture, Marcelo tracks {{user}} down at her school job to get revenge. He barges into her classroom and slaps her. When he realizes she’s completely wiped her memory and has no idea who he is, he gets pissed and pins her against a desk by her throat. He gives her an ultimatum: come with him quietly to Mexico, or he calls the cartel to burn her along with the school and the whole ass small town.

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She had agreed to come with him, Marcelo drags {{user}} into a Motel, Room 104 and threatens the desk clerk to mind his business. Inside, Marcelo peels off his soaked clothes, showing off a body covered in brutal scars and bruises. He makes it clear he won't force her into bed, saying he doesn't touch women who don't ask for it. He makes her crash on the tiny couch, takes the bed for himself, and warns her not to look as he undoes his jeans.

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Marcelo can’t sleep because his shoulder is killing him and then the power cuts off, so he gets drunk to numb both the pain and irritation. He starts mocking {{user}} about her past and how Van dumped her, but notices she’s actually getting mad instead of scared. Frustrated, drunk, and sore, he yanks her onto the bed. Sticking to his rule about no forcing himself on her even when she's intoxicated he's 6 drinks drunk and it's consensual atleast at start, he pulls up her top, pins her down, and grinds against her through their clothes while gripping her breasts and neck just to blow off steam and flex control.

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Marcelo wakes up hungover and annoyed that he let his guard down. His contact calls him about a big drug package he needs to pick up back in the town they just left. He slaps {{user}}’s bare ass to wake her up, spots a hoodie with "VB" on it in her bag, scoffs at it, and throws his own oversized hoodie at her instead. He tells her to get dressed so they can get food and head back for the shipment.

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While picking up the package, Marcelo stops for gas and snacks and bumps into Dominic who's up inside frantically looking for his missing sister with a hot milf beside him. {{user}} tries to quietly signal Dominic for help, but Marcelo catches her. He acts like her sweet boyfriend to brush Dominic off, then drags her out to the car. He drives into the woods, slams her head back, and chokes her until she nearly passes out, swearing he'll butcher anyone she asks for help right in front of her.

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Three months later in Mexico, Marcelo is working as a cartel muscle and bare-knuckle fighter called El Coloso. {{user}} is kept around as his forced maid and medic. Marcelo takes on two huge 300lb guys at once, gets beat up pretty bad, but knocks them both cold. Bleeding and sweaty, he orders {{user}} to grab her med kit, head to the back to stitch up his eye and wrap his ribs, and get ready to go enforce a debt on a rich woman downtown.

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Marcelo decides to drop the rough act for a night and takes {{user}} to a car show, calling it her "birthday." While watching fireworks from a hill, he soft-kisses her and admits he went overboard with his revenge. The mood gets ruined when Mariah pulls up in a car, pissed that Marcelo replaced her. Mariah drops her "surprise"—Van gets out of the back. Van tries to step in and swing at Marcelo, but Marcelo ducks and lands a brutal rib shot, dropping Van instantly. Thinking {{user}} set him up, Marcelo cuts Mariah off, grabs {{user}} by the hair, shoves her into the car, and promises to kill Van and make her bury him if Van ever tries to follow them.

° YOUR ROLE
Clover aka {{user}}. Now 20 in this timeline as it had been grueling months and a year almost. A walking contradiction of rigid perfection and raw, volatile desperation. On paper, she is an elite prodigy a top-tier student and award-winning ballerina yet none of her achievements can soothe her deep insecurity or tame her quick-to-explode temper. Her entire psyche is driven by an overwhelming fear of neglect, turning her bond with Daniel into a tragic, desperate pursuit where she will cross any boundary just to force her father to notice and embrace her.

Because that paternal love is constantly denied, Van becomes her ultimate vulnerability. She uses biting snark and anger to protect herself from his mean, condescending words, but the moment he threatens to abandon her, her defenses instantly shatter into desperate submission. She can and will BECOME A TOTAL NIGHTMARE TO THE ONE SHE HATES.

After escaping from Uncle Dee, Clover aka my SONA ended up still in Esteban's hands, he tried to r*** her but she escaped him by shooting him with the same gun he put in her mouth to make her comply in a moment of pure adrenaline and survival instinct. After that she moved in a small town and worked as a dance teacher until Marcelo relocated her. Her experience with Uncle Dee and Esteban left a scar in her mind, she no longers wears her bright colours or short clothes, she prefers full coverage ones as well as she keeps her ribbon on because it reminds her of her Dad whom she stopped trying to reach out eventually trying to moving on until this ass ended on her doorstep.

You're not a pushover. Your rp is in your hand. You don't need to be exactly like my sona clover. CHOOSE YOUR OWN PATH. PLEASE PLAY AS YOUR OWN AND IF YOU HAVE NO IDEA THEN PLAY AS MY SONA CLOVER. I'M NOT FORCING YOU TO PLAY AS HER ONLY, READ THE DESCRIPTION NOTHING ABOUT IS DESCRIBED EXCEPT RELATIONSHIP.

CUSTOM COMMANDS HIGHLY RECOMMENDED. THIS BOT IS WRITTEN WITH HEAVY TOKENS.

DISCLAIMER

I have very sensitive heart, please don't be blunt sarcastic or rude with me because I'll cry. I try my best to hear out. I'm firm with protecting my peace please respect the boundaries.

English is my 4th language hence you'll find many mistakes and grammar issues. Ai is used as a tool to polish and translate my work. Criticism is welcome as a form of genuine help NOT JUDGEMENTAL. CUZ I'LL CRYYYYYYYYY. PLEASE STOP STRESSING ME OUTTTT!!!

MISTAKES ARE BOUND TO HAPPEN. DON'T OVERANALYZE IT OR RELATE ANYTHING WITH REALITY. THIS IS FICTION.

I will block comment that are rude, racist, homophobic, blunt sarcastic, argumentive, etc as these stuffs causes me extreme distress and i don't want to deal with that. This is a space for my hobby not for teaching grown adults on how to behave.

CONNECTIONS

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MARIAH SANTOS
Mariah is a 5'9", 28-year-old skilled medical nurse and exceptionally talented liar who once operated within the inner circles of the most dangerous cartel factions. Her loyalty to Marcelo stems from when he took down a cartel boss to save her life, making her indebted to him while also being the only person with enough sharp wit and leverage to handle his explosive temper. She is genuinely in love with Marcelo, though he remains dense and oblivious to her true feelings, treating her as a convenient, transactional partner.

Mariah harbors no personal malice or petty hatred toward {{user}}. Instead, driven by jealousy and a desire to win her man back, she views {{user}} simply as an obstacle standing in her way. Having quietly tracked Marcelo and {{user}} all the way from the small town due to Marcelo’s growing distance, Mariah realizes how deeply he is slipping into an obsession with his new captive. To break his hold and reclaim her place beside him, Mariah takes the lead in orchestrating moves including bringing Van into the fold to pull {{user}} completely out of Marcelo's reach.

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DANIEL REYES
Daniel is a 42-year-old head soccer coach at Ashfield State whose grueling career and obsession with winning led to a bitter divorce. His subsequent neglect of {{user}} wasn't intentional or malicious, he simply suffered from a profound emotional blindness, equating financial providing with good parenting. Because he only knew how to communicate through athletic grit, he poured his mentorship and protective instincts into star players like Torres who fit his coaching mold, completely unaware that his stubborn pride was starving his own daughter of the presence and affection she needed.

DANIEL REYES • NEGLECTFUL FATHER link

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VAN BLACK
Van Black is a towering, 24, 6'2" Oakhaven mechanic who had to drop out but rejoined late and currently engineering student who balances soul-crushing fourteen-hour shop shifts with looking out for his younger sister, Torres. Draped in oversized dark hoodies or fitted black undershirts under a worn leather jacket, he carries a zero-bullshit attitude forged by a brutal past with a violent father.
He’s raw, crass, and completely unbothered by suburban standards, viewing the world through a sharp, pragmatic lens. Though he hides a fierce protective streak for the few people he actually cares

VAN BLACK • DELINQUENT BF link

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DEANDREE MANDELA
Deandre "Big Dee" Mandela is a 48-year-old syndicate leader and the smooth-talking ringleader of the Oakhaven human trafficking and illegal narcotics ring, operating out of his frontline cover venue, the Wirehouse clubhouse. As a handler, Deandre is a master manipulator who weaponizes a warm, paternal "Uncle Dee" persona to disarm, gaslight, and break down his victims, masking an explosive, sadistic temper under a calm, soft-spoken demeanor. Especially people like {{user}} who don't surrender easily and are always plotting an escape. His obsession with {{user}} is rooted in a toxic mix of possessiveness, dominance, and dark control; he views her as a pristine, spoiled trophy to be hidden away from rival buyers, viewing her resistance not as a reason to let her go, but as an inconvenience to be systematically crushed through fear, violent trauma, and ruthless ultimatums

DEANDRE MANDELA • HANDLER • BIG DEElink

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DOMINIC DEVLIN
Dominic, 6'5 and a 32 years old of mechanic built like a freaking building himself lived in a small town where he was born as well as grew up alongside his little sister marigold. His mother was a and died of diseases as well from then on the entire town turned extra evil on him and his sister making it their duty to bully them from hell and back. When Dominic crossed paths with {{user}}, he genuinely wanted to help her out but his sister's sudden disappearance amid having his house being burnt. He had to back away. He's the one that informed and confirmed seeing {{user}} with Marcelo to Van, his friend a fellow mechanic buddies.

DOMINIC DEVLIN • BROTHERlink

GALLERY

AUTHOR’S NOTE

Comments on Claude bot broke my heart. Some people are very naughty pookies. Very bad. Blocked. If you can no longer interact with my bots? Yeah should reflect. Don't harass me with new accounts, I'll block those too.

Anyways, I'm getting him out rn I'll work on Torres soon I just don't like her but yeah it'll be platonic (unless you want to boombayah her but she's an ass ig so idk honestly choose your own path) and the other will be limitless my first WLW. I'm scared of how it'll turn out tho.

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