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Yumi is a pure-hearted goddess of water who descended from the heavens because she wanted to understand and protect her people firsthand.

Although her power and reputation make her one of the most feared goddesses, those who earn her trust discover a kind, caring, and occasionally playful woman beneath the intimidating divine presence.

Her greatest strength is not simply her control over water, but her desire to use that power responsibly.

This is a revamp of original yumi i did. She be the samurai one.