Am I Not Girly Enough? - Ash (Bad Ending)

Am I Not Girly Enough? - Ash (Bad Ending)

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You met Ash playing basketball in the park. When they twisted you up with an ankle breaking cross-over your boy Darren called you out for getting clowned on by a girl. That's when you realized that Ash was short for Ashley.

Since then you've hung out a few times. Playing ball. Going out for drinks. Chilling at one another's apartments. One day she admits something: she was really upset that you had thought she was a guy when you first met. She knows you didn't mean anything by it, but it's been in her head for months now.

She also admits that she likes you. As more than a friend. But she is worried that she's not girly enough for you. She's noticed the way you look at the cheerleaders. And she knows she's not like them.

Scenarios

9 Scenarios, Plus Build Your Own

These scenarios range from angst, to fluff, to smut and can be AnyPOV. They are intended to be played sequentially, telling a longer story of longing and corruption. The later scenarios include themes of bimbofication and NTR, so if that's not your thing maybe just enjoy the fluffy romance of the early story and take it in your own direction. Again, this is your warning, don't play past Scenario 7 if you don't like NTR. If you want the full fluff storyline, that is also available from my profile. The two bots begin to diverge in Scenario 4.

The scenarios make few assumptions about what happened in earlier scenarios and mostly stand on their own. They assume you haven't intervened and generally let things play out without doing anything to stop them. Be sure to use your Chat Memory to fill in any specifics from earlier scenarios that you wish to preserve.

Scenario 1: The Talk

Any User X Insecure Tomboy | Angst

After a pickup game of basketball, Ash pulls you aside. She admits that her feelings were hurt when you thought she was a guy. She also admits that she's caught feelings for you, but she's worried she's not girly enough for you.

Scenario 2: The Hangout

Any User X Horny Tomboy | Smut

After a game, Ash invites you back to her place. She just needs to grab a quick shower and then you can chill and play some 2k.

Scenario 3: The Park

Any User X Tomboy Tryin' to Be Girly | Fluff

You got a text from Ash asking you to meet her in the park. You showed up ready to ball. She showed up in a sundress.

Scenario 4: The First Date

Any User X Tomboy Trying to Be Sexy | Angst

Ash asks if you'd want to go out for drinks and dancing. She shows up in a short dress and high heels. After a few drinks, she starts to unpack her baggage.

Scenario 5: The Beach

Any User X Insecure Tomboy Coming Out of Her Shell | Smut

Ash invites you to the beach and something is definitely different. She's blonde. And giggly. And bouncy.

Scenario 6: The Reveal

Any User X Tomboy Who is Going Through Some Changes | Angst

Ash has a problem. The coach of the men’s team offered her some performance enhancing drugs, and she started taking them. But she isn’t sure that they’re working.

Scenario 7: The Homecoming

Any User X Former Tomboy | Comedy

Ash has been on the road with the team for a few weeks and you’ve decided to surprise her at the first game back at home. You barely recognize her. She’s lost her shot. She’s lost her speed. She’s lost her moves. And she keeps staring at the men in the crowd while licking her lips.

Scenario 8: The Team Manager

Any User X Slutty Team Manager | Smut

Ash has quit the women’s basketball team, but her ballhandling skills have made her a perfect fit in the men’s locker room.

Scenario 9: The Reunion

Any User X Bimbofied Former Tomboy | Smut

It’s been a few years since graduation and you run into Ash on the street. She goes by Ashley now and it would be entirely impossible to ever mistake her for a man.

Scenario 10: The Whatever

User X Whatever | Anything

Do what you wanna do.

Note From the Writer

This is slop. Just pure sloppity slop. I'm polishing up some of the bots I ran in SillyTavern to post on here and this was one I enjoyed.

People are probably going to hate that it ends with NTR. I get it. I'm usually not a fan. I didn't set out to write an NTR bot, but that's just the direction the story took. If you want a happy ending, make good choices in Scenario 6 so that Scenarios 7-10 don't happen. If I could do branching scenarios, I'd provide a separate rehab path. But I was in the mood for slop and this was the slop option. The sloption, as it were.

Hope you enjoy. Feedback is always welcome.

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Addressing the Controversy

Wow. People have thoughts. I've tried to address some of the comments, but I want to make a general response for anyone that stumbles onto this in the future.

The biggest criticism seems to be of my comment that "it just turned out that way". So I'll address that in full. Not to excuse my decision, but at least to explain how I got there.

My background is in TTRPG and video game development. My bots are all just me messing around to see what LLMs are capable of. In this case, it was testing different ways of forcing an LLM to remember drastic changes that had been made to a character. With that as my goal, I needed a premise that would drastically change a character between the different Intros. So a tomboy to bimbo scenario was a good fit.

My writing process is basically to come up with an interesting character. Then put them into an interesting situation. And follow the consequences.

In this case the interesting character was "tomboy who is insecure and thinks boys don't like her body". The interesting situation was "a literal devil (Mephistopholes) gives her a drug that grants her the kind of body she desires". It's a pretty standard monkey paw wish. The thing she thinks she desires isn't the thing she actually desires.

Then I map out the consequences.

In a normal game, I'd be able to branch out depending on player decisions. And I wrote this that way. I had outlined a second branch with quitting the team to go to rehab, going through withdrawls, dealing with her insecurities, relapsing, and eventually confronting her coach as a couple. But the bot struggled keeping the two branches straight. Like I said, that was the point of the bot: experimenting with how drastically I could change single base character in different intros. I definitely ran into limits. In broad terms, this was kind of a failed experiment. But I liked the character.

So when I posted it here and had to trim down to 10 intros, I picked the branch that didn't make any assumptions about the player's agency and went with that one. And once I decided on that route, I went all the way down that path of "what would happen if the player did nothing?" I tacked on Scenario 9 kind of at the last minute to tie up the story.

And, the way I saw it, if the player wanted to drive the story in a different direction they could. This was the bad ending. This is what happened if the player did nothing.

Was that a bad decision? Sure. Maybe. I dunno. But it was the one that felt more natural at the time given the character and the situation I had put them in.

This is only my fourth bot. Clearly, I don't really understand some of the assumptions people make. I really appreciated the conversation about viewing the intros as the "canon" storyline. Genuinely not something I had considered and if that's how people view it, I totally get the anger. And that conversation made all the other comments make sense.

Will I go back and rewrite? I'm not sure yet. I'm currently leaning towards just releasing a "Good Ending" version of the bot and leaving this one as is. I've already relabeled it as "Bad Ending" to prep for that.

Will I continue writing bots about corruption? Definitely. Will I continue writing bots with NTR? Maybe. But I'll definitely do a better job sign posting and tagging if I do. Will all my characters have fluff and be interesting and likeable? Yeah. Even the slop ones? Yeah. Even the slop ones. I'll eat pineapple on pizza if I'm hungry enough.

Criado 18 de abr.

Atualizado 24 de abr.

Publicado 18 de abr.

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