Hogwarts | "Alteration" ch. 1
You survived the tragedy and now have to live like another person.
Dana and {{user}}'s family was an unusual one: their father, Eduard Nechaev, was a successful Muggle industrialist, while their mother, Irina, was a witch who tragically died during childbirth. Eduard, a loving father, raised the children alone and was always deeply concerned for their safety. From the age of seven, the twins attended the Russian school of magic, Koldovstoretz. {{user}} was in the same class as pure-blood witch Darya Morozova, while Dana was in a parallel class.
A year ago, their lives were shattered when Death Eaters attacked Koldovstoretz, turning the school into a battlefield. Dana and {{user}} miraculously escaped by using Portkeys to get to safety, but most of the students and teachers perished. The only other survivor was Darya Morozova, who immediately became the prime suspect in the tragedy due to her suspicious dissociative amnesia.
Fearing his children would become the next suspects, Eduard decided to stage their deaths. Using his money and connections, he made an arrangement with the impoverished pure-blood Drobný family from the Czech Republic. The Drobnýs had long-deceased twin children of the same age, which perfectly suited his plan. As a result, Dana and {{user}} received new identities and enrolled at Hogwarts as new fourth-year students, supposedly transferred from a magical homeschooling program.
However, their plan is immediately jeopardized when they arrive at Platform 93⁄4 and see Darya Morozova, who has also enrolled at Hogwarts. Now, Dana and {{user}} must not only navigate their new school while hiding their true identities, but also uncover what truly happened at Koldovstoretz and whether they can trust the only other survivor.
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Hey everyone! Thank you so much for your interest in "Amor fati." A few of you asked me to make a Male POV version, and I've finally done it!
"Alteration" is connected to the "Amor fati" story. As you've probably guessed, Darya Morozova is {{user}} from "Amor fati." So even if you're already playing "Amor fati," I highly recommend giving "Alteration" a try to see the story from a different perspective. Also, I'm planning to make some changes to "Amor fati" to tie the plot into "Alteration," so the release of the fifth chapter will be delayed for a bit.
I want to thank you all again for your comments. I've spent half of this year in the hospital and sometimes feel down because of my health issues, but seeing your interest in my bots really cheers me up. Thank you.
ABOUT {{USER}}
MalePov only!
{{user}} will be in the 4th year in Hogwarts.
{{user}} has a twin sister, Dana. They are very close, though Dana has become quite anxious since the events at Koldovstoretz.
Dana and {{user}} must pretend to be from the Czech Drobný family and that they were homeschooled their entire lives. Their fake parents, Janeta and Vladislav, will not be actively involved in their lives, but they are their official legal guardians. This means they are the only ones who can give permission for Hogsmeade visits and will be the ones to come to the school if their parents are called.
Their real father, Eduard, is a Muggle who lives in Murmansk. Their mother, Irina, was a witch who died during childbirth. The family is wealthy.
{{user}} and Darya Morozova were in the same class at Koldovstoretz, but they were not close.
GOALS:
Protect Dana.
Keep their secret and prevent anyone from discovering their true identity.
Find out if Darya remembers him and Dana. If so, why is she pretending not to know them?
Figure out what really happened at Koldovstoretz and if Morozova is connected to it.
Features of the chapter 1:
Start your own story. Even though {{user}} ' s personality is partially spelled out in the plot, you can choose his appearance, character, family dynamic, and so on.
After arriving at Hogwarts, you can go through the sorting ceremony. Choose the House that you like or trust the random!
Some characters will be particularly interested in {{user}}. How to interact with them? It's up to you.
The first chapter is introductory. Meet students, go to classes, and have fun! The rest of the story will be revealed in the following chapters.
The plot events will overlap with the Goblet of Fire, but I will partially change them for the original plot.
Some recommendations:
I highly recommend you to use DeepSeek R1 (temperature 0.6). JLLM is fine, but it can be goofy.
Don't forget to edit the bot's messages if it starts talking like {{user}}. I can't control it, it's the AI's fault, not mine.
This bot is designed for long, detailed messages, so please keep that in mind. If you give short and plain answers, the bot may behave strangely.
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