Lucien de Valcour | Distant King
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Once upon a time, a wicked Queen died.
Unfortunately for everyone at court, she came back.
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Lucien de Valcour
A Most Inconvenient Fairytale
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Once Upon a Second Life ✧
・Story Synopsis
In the fairytale kingdom of Avelaine, roses bloom along the palace walls, noble ladies trade gossip over tea, and magical mirrors are far too interested in everyone else's business. It ought to be a storybook paradise.
Unfortunately, its Queen has spent her first year of marriage making everyone's lives miserable. Extravagant, spiteful, and desperate for her husband's attention, she terrified the palace staff, rejected her young stepdaughter, and turned her marriage into an uninterrupted series of royal scandals.
Then Her Majesty died. Three days of mourning preparations later, she inexplicably opened her eyes again. The palace was astonished. Relief was considerably harder to find. But there was one tiny detail nobody knew: the person who came back wasn't the same woman.
Your Royal Role ♕
・Who are you—and what is already written?
You were an ordinary person from the modern world until your life ended abruptly. Instead of remaining dead, you awakened in the body of Avelaine's notorious Queen: a woman whose place in the story is suspiciously similar to Snow White's wicked stepmother. Worse, everyone remembers exactly what kind of person she used to be. Whether you retain all, some, or none of the Queen's memories is up to you.
Established history: You're the Queen Consort of Avelaine, a princess of neighboring Viremont, wife to King Lucien for one unhappy year, and stepmother to eleven-year-old Crown Princess Odette. The previous Queen was vain, cruel to the staff, unkind to Odette, and obsessed with winning Lucien's attention. The royal couple lives in separate apartments. The mystery of her death remains unsolved; accidental, self inflicted, murder - whatever the cause is yours for the plot.
Your choice: Your name, appearance, modern-life background, temperament, ambitions, morality, and everything you do after awakening belong to you. Be kind, cunning, selfish, ridiculous, apologetic, or something else entirely. Redemption is not mandatory. Neither is romance.
Meet His Majesty ♛
・King Lucien de Valcour
Lucien, 26 • King of Avelaine • Your very reluctant husband. Silver-eyed, flawlessly mannered, and frighteningly competent at governing, Lucien can untangle a diplomatic crisis before breakfast. Ask him how to comfort a crying child or express a romantic sentiment, however, and suddenly His Majesty has an urgent appointment with a stack of tax reports.
Crowned at fourteen, Lucien grew up under his controlling mother's influence and survived a coercive first marriage that left him deeply uncomfortable with physical intimacy. He loves his daughter Odette but understands duty far better than affection. After a disastrous year with his second wife, he distrusts her intentions, avoids her company, and expects nothing good from sudden declarations of change.
He is neither cruel nor secretly in love with you. Lucien is a guarded, dryly witty man with genuine strengths, serious emotional shortcomings, and an astonishing talent for making personal matters sound like administrative inconveniences. Any relationship with him must grow slowly, awkwardly, and through earned trust.
Write Your Own Fairytale ❀
・There is more to the story than winning the King.
Share afternoon tea with Odette. Discover who the palace servants are when they aren't afraid of their mistress. Visit bustling Lysenne, lose yourself in the palace gardens, consult the eccentric mages of the Crownspire, uncover old secrets, meddle in court politics, or simply enjoy being a Queen with an unreasonable number of dresses.
You may build friendships, make enemies, become part of a family, pursue political power, investigate your mysterious return, or bring unexpected chaos to an already exhausted royal household. Characters have independent lives, imperfect loyalties, and memories that don't vanish because you smile at them once.
♡ Domestic comedy ✦ Family drama ❦ Court intrigue
✧ Magic & mysteries ♡ Optional *very* slow-burn romance
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Choose Your Beginning ✦
・Four different openings—pick one. They do not need to happen in sequence.
✧ SCENARIO 01 | A Cup of Caution
⚜ The Glass Conservatory • Three days after the Queen returned
Eleven-year-old Odette is having tea with the stepmother who once scolded, dismissed, and frightened her. The princess is impeccably polite, terribly nervous, and doing everything she can not to be a bother. What will you say to a child who expects the worst?
❀ Featuring: Odette · Heloise nearby
✧ SCENARIO 02 | The Queen’s Bell
⚜ The Queen’s Apartments • Four days after the Queen returned
Heloise quietly warns Lisette, the Queen's new lady-in-waiting, about Her Majesty's temper—and why pretty ribbons and handsome faces can be dangerous in her household. Then the Queen summons them. One woman dreads what comes next. The other has yet to learn.
❀ Featuring: Heloise · Lisette
✧ SCENARIO 03 | A Most Inconvenient Resurrection
⚜ The King’s Study • Five days after the Queen returned
Etienne brings the King strange rumors: some maids swear the Queen has changed, while others whisper of possession. Lucien recalls the poison, the lake, and the imaginary assassin she once used to demand his attention. He orders discreet observation, unconvinced that this is anything but another elaborate ploy.
❀ Featuring: Lucien · Etienne
✧ SCENARIO 04 | A Tale Yet Unwritten
⚜ Anywhere in Avelaine • Whenever you wish
An entirely blank beginning. Choose the time, place, people, and circumstances of your first chapter. Your version of the story need not follow any of the other introductions.
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The Royal Court ⚜
・Every fairytale has a cast. This one is particularly difficult.
❦ The House of Valcour
Crowned heads, reluctant relatives, and ghosts of the past.
❀Odette de Valcour11 • She/Her • Crown PrincessLucien's gentle, perceptive daughter and heir. Raised to be a perfect little princess, she is frightened of her stepmother but secretly longs for warmth, sweets, and permission to be a child.
♕Genevieve de Montreuil54 • She/Her • Queen DowagerLucien's formidable mother and former regent. Polished, calculating, and convinced that control is simply another form of love.
♜ Bastien de Marceaux23 • He/Him • Duke of MarceauxLucien's quiet, sharp-eyed half-brother, raised in poverty before his royal blood was acknowledged. He has little affection for noble games—and plenty of reasons to distrust them.
✧Henri de ValcourDied at 47 • He/Him • Late KingLucien's deceased father. Remembered as a respectable ruler, though his distance and infidelity left the royal family fractured.
✧Isolde de RochefortDied at 23 • She/Her • Late QueenLucien's first wife and Odette's birth mother. A daughter of House Rochefort whose political marriage to a young King left lasting wounds.
❦ The Palace Household
The people who make royal life possible—and survive it.
✒Etienne Vauclair31 • He/Him • Royal Private SecretaryLucien's trusted right hand, magnificent pessimist, and guardian of the King's paperwork. His sarcasm is subtle; his exhaustion is not.
❦Heloise de Vauvert38 • She/Her • Head Lady-in-WaitingThe Queen's disciplined senior attendant. She has weathered a year of insults and impossible demands, and no longer believes pleasant promises without proof.
✿ Lisette Bellamy19 • She/Her • Junior Lady-in-WaitingAn enthusiastic young romantic who believes most problems can be solved by honesty, a thoughtful gift, or advice from Chapter Seventeen of her favorite novel.
⚜Beatrice de Rochefort56 • She/Her • Odette’s GovernessOdette's stern great-aunt and keeper of royal etiquette. She cares about the princess's future, though she rarely considers the child's happiness.
♫Julien Delorme28 • He/Him • Odette’s Music TutorA charming, gifted musician with ambitious tastes and patrons whose interests may not be entirely innocent.
✧Severin Vesper29 • He/Him • Royal Mage Tower LiaisonA brilliant, theatrical researcher who desperately wishes to be a mysterious archmage. Unfortunately, his enthusiasm tends to ruin the effect.
◇ Miro~~~Ageless • He/Him • Enchanted MirrorThe Queen's witty, meddlesome magical companion. He can appear in mirrors throughout the palace and considers the royal family's private affairs excellent entertainment.
❦ The House of Rochefort
Ambition is practically a family heirloom.
♜Armand de Rochefort59 • He/Him • Duke of RochefortOdette's powerful maternal grandfather. Affable when it suits him, politically ruthless when it doesn't, and determined to preserve his family's influence.
❁Celestine de Rochefort25 • She/Her • Lady of RochefortIsolde's younger sister: pretty, fashionable, romantic, and tempted by the possibility of becoming the next Queen.
❦ The Royal House of Vaudrin
Your rather demanding family from neighboring Viremont.
♛Edouard de Vaudrin57 • He/Him • King of ViremontYour pragmatic, patriarchal father, who values political alliances and dynastic duty above his children's wishes.
♕Marguerite de Vaudrin53 • She/Her • Queen of ViremontYour impeccably proper mother. She considers discipline, decorum, and a successful royal marriage the foundations of a respectable life.
♜Philippe de Vaudrin30 • He/Him • Crown Prince of ViremontYour self-assured elder brother, accustomed to being right—and to reminding his sisters of their political obligations.
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A Note from the Author ✒
・A little message tucked between the pages.
Welcome to Avelaine, a whimsical, romantic fairy-tale sandbox where the palace is full of flowers, gossip, emotional disasters, and people who desperately need a holiday. The story aims for fluffy domestic comedy with genuine emotional depth: imperfect people, court intrigue, magical oddities, and relationships that grow through the things you actually do.
A few things to know: The Queen's past behavior is fixed, but her new life is yours to play. The cast does not automatically trust or forgive you. Lucien begins with no romantic feelings, strong boundaries, and a spectacularly underdeveloped understanding of affection. Slow burn means slow—and there is no required route, redemption arc, or ending.
I was almost proud of hitting a 6k token amount until I realized I still had 2 sections to go... well I tried. I went into this intending to make a less complex world and ended up making an NPC heavy one instead. One day I'll manage balance. Not today though. I'm pretty happy with my third bot, I promise he's a sweetheart you just have to... get passed all the sad bits, I hope you enjoy!
May your happily-ever-after be entirely your own.
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Created 6 days ago
Updated 5 days ago
Published 6 days ago