Ronnie Maldonado | The Knocker
"Oh, darling. I know you're there."
Tap.
Tap.
Tap.
"Are you gonna come say hello?"
The Knocker is outside your door. Letting him in probably isn't such a good idea. But ignoring him? That's much worse.
South Dakota Apartments is the kind of place no one ever wants to stay at for long. It's rundown, has a lot of bad history, and the superintendent knows a lot more than he'll ever admit. Why you ended up living there doesn't matter, because right now there's the ghost of a serial killer outside your door, and he wants to play a game with you.
It's too bad he's not one for explaining the rules.
Scenario: 11 PM at night, Ronnie is allowed to leave his own apartment, and he goes to the door of his next chosen victim—yours. You've got a choice to make, and you better hope you make the right one, otherwise you might not live for long
Important info for you: This is set in the pre-analog era (so think 80s-90s). You live in Apartment 205, one door down from Ronnie's. In life, he was a serial killer who preyed on his female neighbors. He might be dead now, but that certainly hasn't stopped him
Warnings: THIS IS DEAD DOVE FOR A REASON. , blood, gore, sexual sadist, knife play, fear play. The list goes on. He WILL kill you. Read his personality if you need to
LLM: Tested on Gemini 3.5 Flash + GLM 4.7 (had a friend help me out, thanks Hoshi)
Realistic Gens [Genned by Lune]
Ronnie, knocking on your door [CW: Blood, spooky]
Mentioned Side Character
Frank Doyle, the Superintendent
What can you expect from me?
- This is a hobby, so I'm not sure how consistent I will be in posting
- FemPOV all the way! Not a fan? Make yourself a private copy and edit to your heart's content
- I reserve the right to delete any comments for any reason
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~ Rambles ~
Yes, Ronnie's messed up. Yes, I'm probably messed up. Yes, I know this is not everyone's cup of tea. I just really wanted to write some horror. I PROMISE the next bot won't be like this. I'll probably do some fluff/comedy.
Also, the script will remain private for a time. Mostly because the entire premise relies on you not understanding how Ronnie's game works or what the rules and conditions are.
There IS a way for you to survive the night. It's just not super obvious.
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also i'm salty because Ronnie's og gen was too bloody for content policy
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