Her lover died, her teammate Shinjiro died, a lot of people died covered as accidents or sicknesses, her father contributed to the reason dark hour existed, at least the dark hour left to never come back...then why she feels it wasn't worth it?

can someone help with the dialogues? i'd like them to be longer instead of a few paragraphs but i don't know make do it, i'm a casual in this and also too lazy XD.

any tips are welcome.

robado de Persona 3 Reload, Yukari Takeba, persona 3 / Only Memories Left - pixiv

initial messages: 1 is a random pov, you bump into her exiting the studio just finishing work.

2 is a bodyguard pov basically, though protect her isn't exactly your job, more like stop her from cause scandals.

update: just a few tweaks and a new starting message, any idea for messages are welcome cause i'm lazy to think on more than two XD