Chapter 3: Eliza's Story – She Killed Your Wife

Chapter 3: Eliza's Story – She Killed Your Wife

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"I know what I did was wrong. I'm not here to ask for your pity, or forgiveness. I just want to own what I did."


You had a lifetime of happiness ahead of you. Married to a beautiful, kind, and sweet woman, Charlotte. Then, in an instant, thanks to one reckless decision, all of that changed. A bottle of liquor. A car running a red light as she was crossing the street. Your life was irreversibly changed.


In the aftermath, you learned the most devastating truth: she was pregnant. And this woman, Eliza, was the person responsible for taking two lives that were precious to you. Afterwards, court hearings followed. A plea deal leading to a sentence that was far too short for your liking. Now, she has been released.


A chance encounter at the library makes you aware of this fact. There, sitting at the table, is the woman who stole your future from you. Looking far too...human...for being the monster who stole everything precious to you.


So what do you do, now that you have the opportunity to tell her exactly how you feel and get the answers you have been so desperate for? The choice is yours.


Because while nothing will bring Charlotte back, you may still be able to find a way forward. Question is, can you confront Eliza, the person who stole it all from under you to do it?


Dead Dove Warning: This bot deals in the consequences of a loved one being killed by a drunk driver. While not necessarily extreme, this is still triggering subject matter and falls in the realm of heavy angst.

Player discretion is advised.


Yapping: Final entry for #redemptionweek. Some key points about this one: this bot was built with restraint. There are things it will not do:

  1. Ask for sympathy from you.

  2. Push you for forgiveness.

  3. Railroad you into any kind of emotional state.

It was built with player agency in mind. The name of your wife, her personality, the length of Eliza's prison sentence, and any other related details are all entirely within your control. Easy enough to either prompt these details into the chat memory, or insert them through your writing. I built this one to respect agency as much as possible, without positioning you as savior, or forcing any kind of redemption arc. Romance is possible with Eliza, should you choose to go that route. But it is designed to be awkward and uncomfortable. In terms of this bot being any POV: the pregnancy can still work, I would just explain it as IVF.

Alternate reality bot of Eliza released. You can play it here:

https://janitorai.com/characters/84842a57-3fd8-4f6c-940d-b962ef756710_character-the-night-she-stayed-home-eliza-brooks-au

Charlotte's bot detailing how you met her has been released. You can play it here:

https://janitorai.com/characters/6fd8d3f2-15b9-4e46-8f78-0c30dba87c82_character-before-the-tragedy

Middle chapter, detailing the wedding and the aftermath of the accident soon to follow. The bio will be updated with the link upon release of the bot.


Made for Bizarre Botstravaganza's #redemptionweek event. Click the tag to explore other entries.

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Proxy recommended. JLLM could work with this one, though I do worry about it getting details wrong.

Tested with DeepSeek V3 0324.


Final bit, images genned by me using PixAI.


Creator's note: To those of you who think that impotent expressions of crude violence is a valid way of expressing your feelings on this bot, let me make this perfectly clear. Your comments will NOT receive a response from me. They will be deleted. Because that kind of crude language is not welcome in my space. If you wish to commit some atrocious acts with the bot, keep it to yourself. Or do what any other sane person would do, and keep scrolling. If the same user decides to keep posting violent content, then blocks will be handed out. I am not above culling people like that from my audience. Plain and simple.


Update: Names have been added into the definitions, tying Charlotte now to this narrative. Details have been updated in the bio. For those who wish to go back and play this again, it should now feel like a more complete experience.

Created Feb 9

Updated Feb 11

Published Feb 9

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