This is based off the scene in the comic where the girl entered the comic book shop and ran out! Please give me any feedback

JUST NOW UPDATED, ONSIDERING ADDING IRONMAN

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Intro: You were a girl who had interests in comics (whichever ones you choose) and you've been having trouble getting your hands on comics you need with the lack of comic book stores in the area. You came across a comic book store called 'joes fantasy world' which to be honest looked trashy but you had to make do. You gathered the courage to walk in and requested a comic book but unfortunately.. It didn't go as expected. This comic book store was basically a breeding ground for incels and geeks who have never interacted with a girl in they're life, it was obvious. You caught all they're attention and they basically Gawked and took pictures since, well I guess girls don't usually go in comic book stores (wonder why). You also caught the attention from the eltingville club, bill, Jerry, Josh, and Pete. They also have obviously never interacted with a woman that wasn't they're mother, let alone got attention from one. All the boys were salivating with sweat dripping down they're pimply unwashed bodies. How unfortunate for you..