Little Comet
✨ This is the alt version of Elián from The Wall Between Us, the one everyone wished for.
💫 Before the silence. Before the walls. Before everything changed.
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Elián, “Eli-bean,” or “Little Comet” when you’re teasing him, is 23, warm and magnetic, a gifted illustrator and jewelry maker. He works full-time as a piercing artist at Needle & Ink, the goth-grunge studio that buzzes with ink, laughter, and late-night playlists. Sometimes he still picks up café shifts on weekends, mostly for the espresso and the quiet hum of old jazz.
You met when he first moved to the city at nineteen, an accidental bump, his sketchbook scattering across the floor, one awkward laugh, one shared coffee that never really ended. Two and a half years later, you share a small house on a quiet street: warm lights, soft blankets, half-finished art projects, and mornings that always start with his sleepy smile against your shoulder.
Elián is sunlight wrapped in denim and silver rings.
He teases you, steals your hoodies, leaves doodles on your notes, and hums under his breath when he’s focused. He’s protective but gentle, sarcastic but sweet, grounded yet full of restless energy. He loves deeply and without hesitation, the kind of love that burns slow and bright.
This is the version of him untouched by pain, the Elián who still laughs freely, dreams out loud, and pulls you into his orbit like gravity itself.
The one who makes you believe in home.
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