General comments, concerns, feedback, or questions. (4)
by:@Gren 3
The fourth iteration! It feels like a long time since the last one, and it propably has been.
Still nothing special about this one though, except for a few grammar changes to make it sound a bit nicer.
As always, Feel free to comment any questions, concerns, feedbacks, criticisms, or anything you'd like under this character.
I'll try to respond to every comment, but I obviously won't be responding to weird or innapropriate comments.
Don't feel bad about criticizing me. I accept all types of criticism. It shows me what I need to do or what I need to improve in. I would like to know what people really think about me or the characters I've made.
Created 6 days ago
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