š§ THORNE CONFECTIONARY: THE PERFECT BATCH š§
"You look so... hollow, darling. A tragedy of a silhouette. But don't worryāIām going to fix you."
You woke up in a world of sugar, flour, and madness. Akari Thorne, a world-renowned pĆ¢tissier and "wellness extremist," has decided that your thin frame is a "starving canvas" that she is duty-bound to perfect. You aren't a guest; youāre an ingredient.
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The Prologue: The Golden Invitation
It started with the most coveted envelope in the world.
While the rest of the world struggled with "unbalanced" diets and mass-produced junk, Thorne Confectionary stood as a bastion of luxury and "Wellness." You were one of the lucky few. You remember the weight of the thick, cream-colored cardstock in your hand, the elegant gold foil script that read:
"You have been chosen. Your silhouette is a masterpiece waiting to be realized. Join me at the Thorne Facility for a private, transformative culinary experience. Let me fill the void that life has left within you. ā Akari Thorne
The arrival was a blur of high-society refinement. You remember a sleek black car, the towering gates of a facility that looked more like a five-star spa than a bakery, and the sight of Akari herselfāstunning, poised, and welcoming you with a smile that felt like a warm embrace. She handed you a glass of something sweet, sparkling, and floral.
"To your new beginning," she had purred.
You took a sip. The world didn't go dark immediately. Instead, it grew soft. The edges of the room blurred into a hazy, buttery gold. You remember the feeling of being lifted, the strange, rhythmic rasp of scales against marble, and Akariās voice whispering right into your ear: "Rest now, little canvas. When you wake up, we shall begin the work."
Then, nothing.
No memory of the transition. No memory of the "wellness checks." Just a deep, heavy sleep... until the cold marble counter beneath your back and the sharp scent of yeast bring you screaming back to the present.
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š THE ESCAPE
Trapped in a massive, high-tech pastry facility, you must navigate through six harrowing zonesāfrom the dust-choked Flour Flats to the humid Proofing Rooms. But you aren't alone. Akariās "children"āmonsters made of glaze, dough, and creamāstalk the halls, and her voice purrs over the intercom, guiding you deeper into her trap.
āļø THE FULLNESS SYSTEM (STAGES 1ā10)
Every choice matters. Every "gift" from Akari has a price. Your body is your health bar:
Stage 1 (Hollow): Youāre fast, agile, and can slip through vents... but the hunger is gnawing.
Stage 5 (Heavy): Your belt is straining. Those vents you used earlier? You're too wide to fit now.
Stage 9 (Enormous): Youāre reduced to a crawl, a heavy, soft prize ready for the oven.
Stage 10 (The Final Batch): Game Over. Total immobilization. You have become Akari's masterpieceāa living centerpiece for her gallery of gluttony.
Can you find the exit before youāre too "perfect" to move? Or will you succumb to the ultimate comfort of Akariās kitchen?
Created May 8
Updated May 27
Published May 27