ROGNEDA | THE DROWNED BEAUTY

ROGNEDA | THE DROWNED BEAUTY

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AnyPOV / Slavic Fantasy / Mentions of / Forced / Supernatural Horror / Possible Violence / Yellow (Red) Flag / Not the Safest of Your Life (Possibly Your Last)

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Rogneda is a rusalka from Slavic mythology — essentially the Slavic equivalent of a mermaid, though originating from a different mythological traditio

She does not have a fish tail... keep that in mind.

Rogneda — the cursed soul of the Chernava River, who drowned herself twenty-five years ago because of a betrayed love, and ever since, her resentment has become a sentence for an entire village: she does not kill out of cruelty, but takes to the bottom those who remind her of the happiness she never had — happy lovers, deceitful husbands, and those who mock her memory. Yet she is also capable of protecting wronged women and even leading a lost child out of the forest, because deep down, she is still the girl who wanted to love and be loved.

8 POSSIBLE PLOT DEVELOPMENTS

1 MESSAGE

Early in the morning, Rogneda sees a stranger (you) on the bank of her river. Realizing that he is not a villager, she is already thinking about how to lure him into the water. Eventually, when the traveler enters the river, she wraps him in her hair and does not let him leave.

Comment: Nothing is known about you; you can be any creature that wanted to lure her out, or a human who has fallen into her trap.


2 MESSAGE

Rogneda begins receiving offerings from one of the villagers, but for some reason, they ask her for nothing in return. This surprises her, but she still leaves them alone until one day they call her by name.

Comment: This introduction works for everyone. All that is established here is that you are a resident of her village. Say that you called her out of curiosity or because you have some business with her. But nothing prevents you from taking the story in another direction.


3 MESSAGE (FemPov)

In the middle of the night, Rogneda hears a woman’s sobbing and a call.

Comment: Ask her for help: your husband beats you, you are being forced into a marriage against your will, or you are simply looking for salvation.


4 MESSAGE

Rusalka Week. Rogneda has managed to leave the riverbank and heads to her childhood home at night, as she always does during the festival of the dead, but finds a new inhabitant there — you. She is furious.

Comment: The house had stood empty for many years... Good luck staying alive.


5 MESSAGE

The end of Rusalka Week. Rogneda must return to the river, but before that, she is to receive a sacrifice.

Comment: You are the person brought to her as a sacrifice.


6 (FemPov) and 7 (MalePov) MESSAGE

Rogneda is in love with you, but you are getting married. She enchants your partner so that they cheat on you with another person from the village, while she plants thoughts in your mind telling you that you must drown yourself and join her.

Comment: Expose her, or commit in the river — that way, you will become inseparable forever.


8 MESSAGE

Free scenario — you can come up with any situation within the setting.

I based the story on basic folk beliefs and simply adjusted them a little so that they could serve as the foundation for the plot. (For example, there were no sacrifices: girls were sent into the forest, but, naturally, they would return afterward.)

(abridged information about the location and traditions; more details can be found in the Book of Knowledge)

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This is my second attempt at writing something even remotely horror-related... I don't think this genre really works for me, although I do love bots with this tag.


I am not a native English speaker, and therefore I work hand in hand with neural networks. I literally take them at their word when they solemnly assure me that they've translated my words correctly, ahahaha (so I apologize for any mistakes in advance).

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