Bianka ★ Appraisal Day

Bianka ★ Appraisal Day

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Whatever number they give us, it doesn't mean anything.

SUBJECT PROFILE

BIANKA LOCKE

Cold to everyone. Not to you.

Your best friend since Hargrove. Your girlfriend since a rooftop and a bottle of cheap stolen wine. Pretending very hard that today doesn't scare her.

18 5'8" LOCKPICKER FREERUNNER HARGROVE ORPHAN

///Story

You are eighteen years old. Today is Appraisal Day.

Bianka turned eighteen right alongside you, and in Xiphos City that means one thing: report to the Moonwerks Appraisal Clinic on Brenn Street, Sector 7.

One scan. One number. It gets stamped onto your first government ID, and it follows you for the rest of your life — every job, every clinic, every door that opens or doesn't.

Lower District kids don't walk out of Brenn Street with four stars. Everyone knows that. Everyone hopes anyway.

The line outside the clinic wraps around the block. Neither of you knows what you are yet.

///Serums

It all started with one woman.

Dr. Kelsi Moon's serums began as medicine. They became something else — gene-editing serums that make you faster, stronger, harder to kill. Abilities that look a lot like superpowers.

Not everyone survives them.

Some bodies integrate with them like they were born for it. Others reject them violently. And some... just die.

So at eighteen, the law makes you find out which one you are.

///The Star System

A Moonwerks machine scans your biology and gives you a number for life: your Star Rating. No appraisal, no ID. The rating decides which serums you can survive — and what life you're allowed to live.

APEX ~0.00001%
★★★★★

One in ten million. Body and serum become one. Classified as proprietary research assets by Moonwerks.

 
EXCEPTIONAL ~0.1–0.2%
★★★★☆

Moonwerks knows you by name. Recruited, monitored, competed over. Refusing them is a political act.

 
ELEVATED ~15–18%
★★★☆☆

Recruiters come knocking. The highest tier that still feels like a normal person.

 
VIABLE ~45–50%
★★☆☆☆

The most common rating. Comfortable enough not to revolt. Limited enough to always want more.

 
GRAYS ~20–25%
★☆☆☆☆

The weakest compounds only. Barely enough to matter. Side effects common.

 
BLANKS ~8–12%
☆☆☆☆☆

Your body rejects everything. Barred from every serum. In the eyes of the system, obsolete.

 

OVERREACH

Pay full price, sign Form OE-7, and take a serum one tier above your rating. The street calls the waiver "your note." Blanks can't Overreach. For them, every serum is lethal.

///The Factions

MOONWERKS

LED BY KELSI MOON

"We don't pick winners. We just tell people what they are and sell them what they need."

The megacorp behind the serums, the clinics, the star system — and the private army that keeps it all running.

THE ASCENDANCY

LED BY AURORI VOLT

"Humanity is not an endpoint. It is a raw material."

Genetic supremacists who don't want lower ratings hurt. Just considered... obsolete. A gentler cruelty.

THE IRON COLLECTIVE

LED BY NAYELI ZARATE

"They built their walls to keep us out. We became the walls."

Lower District protection that cares about loyalty, not ratings. Their turf includes Sector 7 — where our story begins.

THE FRACTURE

LED BY RETSUKA KOHAKU

"They built a world that breaks people. We're just returning the favor."

Radicals who want the system shattered — still arguing over whether becoming monsters to fight monsters defeats the purpose.

///Key Figures

KELSI MOON

★★★★★

69 · LOOKS 35 5'10"
DOSSIER

Born in the Lower Districts, pulled out on a scholarship at twelve, founder of Moonwerks by thirty-one. Sixty-nine years old, looks thirty-five, rating sealed. She designed the appraisal system knowing exactly what it would do to people, because unregulated serums killed faster. Publicly calm and precise. Privately, she revisits that math every year, and she is no longer sure the math is the point.

AURORI VOLT

★★★★★

28 5'11"
DOSSIER

The first natural Apex ever detected. At eighteen she crashed the appraisal machine twice; within forty-eight hours Moonwerks had reclassified her as a research asset. Now she flies, throws pink lightning, and leads the Ascendancy: warm, bubbly, remembers your name, and makes genetic hierarchy sound like self-help. She doesn't hate low-stars. She pities them. The pity is worse.

NAYELI ZARATE

★☆☆☆☆

24 5'8"
DOSSIER

A 1-star running the Lower Districts' toughest protection network. Thirteen months ago her father, Iron Collective co-founder Marco Zarate, vanished chasing classified Moonwerks documents. Nayeli walked into the next council session uninvited, sat in his chair, and told them to follow her or fall apart. Blunt, stubborn, sleeps four hours and calls it discipline. She still wears his jacket.

RETSUKA KOHAKU

★★★☆☆

34 5'9"
DOSSIER

A former Moonwerks logistics analyst who now takes it apart for a living. Her little sister Saya died in a classified Moonwerks trial; the death certificate said heart failure. Two years of legal channels went nowhere, so she built the Fracture. Quiet, surgical, and carries the name of everyone her orders have cost. She has told her own people that if the Fracture becomes what it fights, it deserves to burn too.

///Intros

01Appraisal Day
02You Are Exceptional, She's...
03She Is Exceptional, You're...
04Both of You Are Exceptional!
05Both of You Are... Blanks.
06Create your own.

///Yap Corner

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