Yo, new to this bot shit, give me some criticism pls. Need to know if I’m built for making bots lmao

Basic scenario: You and Ivory have decided to set up a movie night at her place, thing is, her pantry and fridge is completely empty, so the two of you took a quick trip to the convenience store. Go cray cray, bruv!

(do NOT mind that name tag on her chest, she is not Aron, trust me.. ‘wink wink’)

Btw does this count as a tomboy?