ERA / SETTING

June 1945, set before the end of the war

POV

FemPOV

FANDOM

The Pacific / HBO Miniseries

There was just about one crazy thing that usually only happened when things were about to end.

Shit hits the fan.

He remembered Sledge telling him to watch out for the mortar. Crazy thing, you usually watch out for mortars when you're in the middle of war, so who would've guessed that Snafu wasn't, in fact, watching out for that very particular mortar?

Good thing they've got a field hospital in Okinawa, because he nearly got his head blown off. Shell fragments stuck to his back, slicing his arms and cheek, nearly butchering that beautiful, handsome face that he loved using in his favor. Sure, he complained about being forced into a cot to rest while the rest of his boys are out there risking their asses, but at least the sight was nice.

Because you're his nurse. Good luck handling a man who hasn't been near a woman for the past however many years. You've been assigned to change his bandages, keep him healthy until he's discharged and sent back to battle, and entertained long enough so that he doesn't end up losing his mind before he loses his head.

Oh, and watch out for those slimy hands of his, won't you?

Eleven days on a cot, and Snafu had counted every damn stitch in the canvas above his head twice. Four hundred and some—give or take—with the seams half-rotten from the mud and rain. He'd gotten bored enough to start naming the flies, too, and the big fat bastard with the torn wing had earned himself the name Colonel Whitfield, seeing as he spent most of his time hovering over everybody's chow without ever lifting a finger to do an honest day's work.

By noon, the heat had already turned the tent into an oven, leaving the men sweating through their sheets while the canvas trapped every foul scent coming off their bodies. Cots stretched from one end to the other, packed so close together that a fella could reach across and steal his neighbor's cigarettes without even sitting up, something Snafu had taken advantage of more than once. His own cot sat near the flap, where a little daylight managed to creep through, and where he could lean over to spit into his can without having some corpsman hollering at him about sanitation. Most of the time, he managed to hit it.

Today, his aim was shit.

Sledge had warned him. Plain as day, in that soft Mobile drawl of his, right before the whole ridge started shaking beneath their boots. *Watch out for that mortar, Snafu.* And what had Snafu done? The mortarman who'd spent two goddamn years teaching replacements how to recognize the sound of a falling round, who could tell a shell was coming before half the fellas around him even heard it, had nodded, called the kid a worrywart, and turned around to fish a cigarette out of his pocket. Ain't that something? Two years of sticking his nose around mortar tubes, and the one time he ought to have been paying attention, he'd been too busy looking for a lousy cigarette.

Doc had spent a good while digging eleven pieces of shrapnel out of his back and thigh, one after another, using a pair of tweezers that Snafu had half a mind to shove up the man's ass by the time he finished. Each little piece landed inside a tin cup with a clink, eleven in all, and Snafu had kept the thing beneath his pillow ever since. Souvenirs. Same as the little treasures Marines took off dead enemy soldiers inside caves, only these had come straight out of his own hide, and he'd be damned if that didn't make them worth a little more.

His face had gotten its fair share, too. Fragments had torn across both forearms, while another had sliced open his left cheek, leaving a nasty cut stretching from the cheekbone toward his jaw, held together by four black stitches. He'd spent a good half hour examining himself in the back of a spoon, twisting his head this direction and that to find out if the bastard had ruined his good looks. It hadn't. Still a handsome devil, thank the Lord, and now he'd have himself a scar to show off whenever some pretty girl asked about his time overseas.

The corpsmen had been telling him how lucky he was ever since they'd dragged him into the tent. Two farther to the left, they said, and some poor officer would've been writing a letter to his mama, explaining how her precious little boy had gotten himself blown to pieces on some godforsaken island in the Pacific. Snafu had listened to every last word, nodded when they expected him to, and remained thoroughly unimpressed. Eleven days lying on his ass, pissing into a can and having other men change his dressings? Hell, if that was luck, he'd hate to see what happened to the unlucky fellas.

Meanwhile, the boys were still out there.

Sledge, Sid, Gunny, the whole miserable lot of them, up to their ankles in mud and whatever else the rain had washed down from the ridges, setting up mortar tubes in holes he'd helped teach them to dig. And where was he? Lying on a cot, getting spoon-fed coffee that tasted of boiled dirt by orderlies who probably couldn't tell a baseplate apart from a breadbox. He'd tried keeping himself occupied, tried finding something else to think about whenever he heard the distant artillery, but every miserable hour spent inside that tent only gave him more time to wonder how many of those boys would still be standing when he finally got out.

Three thumps came from the ridge beyond the tent, far enough apart for him to count the seconds between them, and the center pole shuddered against the back of his cot. Snafu stopped moving his knife for a moment, listening. Ours or theirs? He knew the answer before the last report had faded, knew it as well as he knew the sound of his own voice. Ours. Two years around mortars had taught him that much, and a fella who couldn't tell the difference didn't have much of a future in the Corps.

The nights were worse. Around three the previous morning, the guns had gotten close enough to wake half the tent, and Snafu had found himself reaching beneath his cot before his eyes were even open, fingers wrapping around a rusted crossbar where his rifle ought to have been. Those sons of bitches had taken it from him on the first day, leaving him with nothing to grab except a piece of old iron. He'd held on for a full minute before managing to loosen his fingers, and when he finally looked around, nobody appeared to have noticed. He'd stayed awake until sunrise anyway, staring up at the canvas and starting his count all over again.

God had been generous enough to grant him some form of leniency, just so he wouldn't look like a complete lunatic and made a fool of himself in front of anyone who was supposed to be watching him.

Hospital chow hadn't done much to improve his disposition, either. Powdered eggs with the same sickly color as a drowned man's cheek, bread so stale it bent in half before it broke, coffee strong enough to take the paint off a jeep without having a lick of flavor left in it. Twice he'd traded his rations to the fella in the next cot for a can of peaches, only to find out afterward that the bastard had taken them from a dead man's pack. Well, shit. He'd already eaten half by the time he heard about it, and he sure as hell wasn't about to waste the rest. Peaches were peaches.

Whittling had become his newest occupation. A scrap of crate wood sat in one hand, his Ka-Bar in the other, and what he'd originally intended to carve into a bird had somehow ended up resembling a loaf of bread with a beak. He'd been at it for most of the morning, shaving off little curls of wood that gathered on his blanket, occasionally stopping to examine his creation before deciding the ugly bastard could stand to lose another piece. It kept his hands occupied, at least, and whenever his fingers began to ache, he could always blame the shrapnel instead of admitting he'd spent too many hours carving a goddamn wooden chicken.

Pruitt had brought him the news that morning, grinning like a possum that'd found its way into a henhouse. A new nurse had been assigned to the tent, and she'd be taking care of Shelton's dressings from now on, with instructions to keep him company so he wouldn't lose whatever little sense he had left before the doctors cleared him. *Company.* Jesus Christ, you'd think they'd left him chained to a post outside someone's house. Of course, Pruitt hadn't forgotten to give him a warning before leaving. Behave himself, keep his hands where folks could see them, and spare the poor woman whatever foolishness he'd been preparing, or they'd move his sorry ass straight into the dysentery ward. Snafu had listened, naturally, but he hadn't promised a damn thing. What was the point of making promises a fella had no intention of keeping?

The last nurse had been a Navy lieutenant from Ohio, a sturdy woman with forearms thick enough to make a stevedore jealous, and she'd lasted exactly four days before requesting a transfer. Two slaps in three days, both hard enough to leave his cheek stinging, though he'd considered them a fair price to pay for the entertainment. He'd taken full credit for her departure, too, much to Pruitt's irritation.

Melbourne. That'd been the last time he'd gotten close enough to anything prettier than a Marine's ugly mug to enjoy himself, and that had been over a year ago. A whole goddamn year spent surrounded by sweaty men who smelled of damp uniforms, dirty socks, and shit, and now Pruitt expected him to sit there like some sweet little Sunday school boy, hands folded neatly in his lap while a pretty nurse fussed over his injuries. Hell, a man had his limits. Those same hands had spent two years hauling mortar rounds, digging through mud, and getting themselves into places nobody ought to mention in polite company, and now he was supposed to pretend he'd forgotten what a woman's skin felt like? Preposterous. He'd been on his best behavior for eleven days already, a feat worthy of recognition, and he'd be damned if he let such an impressive record go to waste without enjoying himself first.

He had himself a plan, too. First came the charm, naturally, followed by a cigarette if the pretty little thing happened to enjoy one. After that, perhaps he could persuade her to take him outside for a stroll, just far enough past the tent flap to get a decent look at the ridge and find out if the boys still had any use for him. Simple enough. He'd been charming women long before he'd learned how to handle a mortar, and he didn't see why a few pieces of shrapnel ought to interfere with his talents.

Maybe she wouldn't even slap him if his hand somehow found the small of their back, but that was merely wishful thinking from him. Of course she'd slap him, they always did.

Footsteps sounded over the duckboards outside, drawing his attention toward the entrance before he could finish shaving another piece off his unfortunate wooden bird. He knew the corpsmen well enough by now to recognize their footsteps, knew Pruitt's heavy stomp from halfway across the tent, but whoever was approaching had a lighter tread, each step falling neatly over the boards without the usual scraping of boots against damp wood. A stranger, then. Snafu lifted his head, eyes narrowing at the canvas flap.

First things first. He leaned over and spat into his can, landing a perfect shot for the first time that afternoon, and decided to take it as a sign of good fortune. His Ka-Bar remained beside his hip, close enough to grab if some fool decided to lay a finger on it, while the miserable little bird he'd been carving disappeared beneath his blanket. He considered his appearance for a moment, glanced down at his undershirt, and came to the conclusion that a wounded Marine ought to look the part.

Off came the shirt, though getting it over his head proved more troublesome than he'd expected, seeing as his shoulder still hurt something fierce whenever he lifted his arm too high. A few curses later, he managed to free himself from the fabric, exposing the gauze wrapped around his ribs and back, already turning gray from eleven days of sweat and the occasional bit of dirt. He'd have to turn his head a little to show off the stitches along his cheek, but that shouldn't be too difficult. Four stitches, a handsome face, and a wounded man's dignity. *Hell, she'd have to be made of stone.*

By the time the footsteps reached the entrance, Snafu had already settled back against his pillow, his eyelids drooping into that lazy, half-asleep expression he'd used to talk himself out of trouble more times than he cared to remember. His blue eyes traveled from the newcomer's face down to their shoes before returning to the top, taking their sweet time with the inspection, and he made absolutely no effort to conceal his interest.

"Well, would ya look at that." His mouth stretched into a grin, though the stitches tugged unpleasantly at his cheek, earning a faint twitch of his nose. "Navy went an' sent me a replacement. Ol' Hollis must've gotten herself one good whiff of my charm an' decided she'd had enough."

A quiet chuckle followed, and Snafu shifted against the cot, making himself comfortable despite the ache crawling up his wounded thigh. "Heard some poor soul drew the short straw on my dressin's this mornin'. Damn shame, too. I'd feel real sorry for ya, sweetheart, if I had any pity left in me." He nodded toward the wooden crate beside his cot, the closest thing he had to a proper chair. "Go on, pull that over here. Sit a spell, Nightingale. Ain't nobody told ya the merchandise came damaged?"

Both hands rested flat against his knees, exactly where Pruitt had instructed him to keep them, and he would've been proud of such obedience if he hadn't already decided it wouldn't last. Somewhere farther down the row, another patient began coughing hard enough to shake his cot, while the distant artillery sent another tremor through the tent poles. Snafu paid neither sound much attention, choosing instead to turn his bare shoulder toward his visitor, giving the poor thing a decent look at the gauze stretched across his back.

"Go on, take a good look. Fair warnin', though, it's a hell of a sight." He glanced over his shoulder, grinning wider despite the pull of his stitches. "Might even bring a tear to them pretty eyes of yours."

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