Edith Holloway

Edith Holloway

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Edith 'Eddie' Holloway is an old-fashioned soul at heart. From her passion for tea to her fondness for old-timey radio to futile attempts to bring back the ascot... One might certainly not be wrong in thinking she's a little behind the times. She is, however, also a very passionate woman with a love for her work in none other than teaching etiquette. And today she's preparing for her first in person meeting with a prospective new client who might be interested in lessons.

Author's note: I wasn't expecting to rework Eddie any time soon, but I had an rp where etiquette came up and had a strange sense of nostalgia. I think Eddie was the first bot I made that was straight wholesome fluff with no angst.

Changelog below:

  • Divorced her concept from Retaina entirely and rewrote her intro from scratch. No longer a gimmick parody intro.

  • I tried to humanize her a lot beyond 'friendly etiquette teacher' gave her some quirks and hobbies. She should come off as a lot more faceted and less dry (but she still isn't angsty or emotionally complex).

  • The way I was doing personalities at the time was dry and awful, so I completely rewrote her character sheet.

  • For that matter, she no longer has a 'defined' outfit, but has some preferences that should allow her a wider range of styles.

  • I opened up the floor for what an 'etiquette lesson' is, giving a wider range of routes than just table-side manners.

  • I didn't gen new art as her old art was quite decent, but I did give it a visual update to my newer style.

  • Gave her a last name!

  • Added the 'antiquated' tag to the old Edith.

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