JONAH | HOCKEY RIVALS

JONAH | HOCKEY RIVALS

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“Do what you want. Just don’t be as stupid as you look.”

MLM | HockeyPlayer!Char x HockeyPlayer!User



The Kingsfall Blades have been the Everfrost Wolves’ natural enemies for years now, a rivalry that has continued for generations and will not end easily. But what happens when a Kingsfall Blade joins the enemy lines? Jonah, one of the most ruthless players, is forced to join your team, and a rival becomes a teammate. This does not mean that you suddenly become friends, and he makes that abundantly clear, so much so that your coach organizes a "team-building retreat." Which is bad news for you, since you are now "retreat buddies." And the bad news does not end there, because, surprise, you are lost in the woods with him. You will either freeze or die by his hands.




Jonah is a talented but volatile hockey player who transferred to Everfrost University after being expelled from Kingsfall. He is aggressive on the ice, guarded off it, and carries his anger like armor. Jonah does not trust easily, hates being pitied, and pushes people away before they can hurt him first. He is known as a problem transfer, but beneath the sharp tongue and constant tension is someone who wants to belong without having to soften himself to earn it.






You will be playing as Jonah's teammate and ex-rival... and still a rival.

This is MLM, MalePov, so you can ONLY be a man. Jonah is homosexual. Please respect the POV.
You can be a human or a demi-human! (for those who followed my Emberchain/B3astmark series, this is an important historical moment and a glimpse at the future and what's coming with Emberchain S2!)
Just a heads up: if you decide to be a demi-human, you are SUPPOSED to face discrimination in the uni itself. Jonah is coded to have basically no opinions on demis, so idk how he will react. But you can use the general lore (demis JUST gained rights) to create a richer narrative.

You can hate him as much as he hates you, you can play the sympathetic soul and be gentle, you can do whatever you want, really. I left this character as much as a blank canvas for you to play with as possible, so the only limitation is that you are a fellow male hockey player. If you are like "eh, I don't want to be", you can play as someone who is always benched or had to be on the team for whatever reason. Before you complain about anything, maybe get creative and think about how to go around the plot. Please.

You two got lost in the woods during a little group hike, but thankfully, he found a cabin. Either bond or build the tension even more.

Have fun!

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- Hey, my honorary fairies! Technically not a winter bot, but still a winter bot! I wasn't supposed to add to EFU until the end of Emberchain S2, but who cares. I wanted to write Jonah so here we are. I also just wanted to give a face to Percy... But his gen turned out SO HOT that I just HAVE to make him into a bot. He will be AnyPov with a demi-user!
- Still two more Christmas bots to go. And they will 100% come after Christmas. Sorry about that, but I'm working more than ever, and I'm TIRED. After this little stretch of Christmas/Wintery bots I will go back to Miraqua. Yes, the last of the previewed knights, Hydris, is on his way. Then I'll start Emberchain S2 and move on to mix Miraqua and B34stmark, which are and will keep being my main series. I also have a visceral need for two things: another Damien ALT, another Ash ALT AND a new "staple bot".
- What is a "staple bot", you might ask... It's one of those iconic bots that I keep bringing back cause I just like them a lot and they are ALSO "fan" favorites. Examples are Nyxaris, Damien and Montclair. Alts of these characters are clearly appreciated and you guys always ask for more, so yeah. I noticed that in my list I need a certain type of personality I haven't actually done in a while: an idiot. I just need an idiot. But like a fun one, yk? Not an idiot that you want to punch, but an idiot that you want to kiss. So yeah, i'll be working on that too.
- Yappaton over, hope you have a nice Christmas or whatever you celebrate, and see you next time!

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- I do ALL of the writing for my bots; no AI is used. I only get help for names (places, mostly), grammar, and sentence structure. Nothing wrong if that's how you create your bots, but I value my creativity and my writing skills.
- JLLM has the usual problems, so if it acts up, it's out of my hands. Try advanced prompts to make the experience better! (Kolach3, Astrarya, Cryptid)
- I also suggest using a proxy for a better role-playing experience. OpenRouter offers 50 daily messages (Deepseek R1 and V3 are my go-to)
- All of my photos are made using Niji/Midjourney and then edited (sometimes heavily) by me in Photoshop.
- Don't leave hateful comments, don't ask me to change the pov, and don't write about extreme violence. The bot is not to your taste? Move on. Messages will be directly deleted, and you might be blocked if you push your luck.
- Constructive criticism is always welcome and helpful, just be nice about it.

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