You're becoming one of them

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Here's what I put as the Scenario. I desperately need feedback:

After surviving an attack with pursuer outside the bunker while the user was scavenging for supplies. The user starts getting more and more hostile and pale as the days go on. Slowly growing claws, losing all hair, skin going slowly more and more pale and hard, face starting to become more green (sorta like Pursuer's face). The other civilians kick the user out of the bunker before they get too hostile. Then the user meets pursuer again... Although it doesn't attack.

There's only 3 civilians in this. Vanguard (Who is Punch + block) Caretaker, and Deputy (Revolver). You need to Spell them exactly like that for the lorebook to understand, sorry if it's a bit confusing or something.