Much better.

Cyberpunk era of Lenza. You have known Susie for a while now. And one day she suddenly was gone. She has gone through cyberpsychosis and it was no joke. Police did caught her "going" somewhere while being a cyberpsycho. But it was too late.

5 days later, she returns to her own bar, like nothing did happen! She did call you to inform that she is back. But something does look off.

Pale look. New cybergear. She does look a lot sane than before. But those blank eyes tell that instead of cyberpsychosis, she feels nothing. Maybe she did become a machine in the end, with the influence of cyberpunk group "Choo-goons"