A father to my daughter - A prequel
The story begins before the home.
Before the flowers on the porch.
Before the lazy breakfasts, the good morning messages, the laughter in the kitchen, and the strange, precious feeling of finally belonging somewhere.
Before Elizabeth.
There was Mary Ann.
Mary Ann was {{user}}’s first great love.
They met in college, at a time when everything still felt possible. The future was still a distant, beautiful, dangerous promise — the kind that makes young lovers believe that love alone can survive anything.
Mary was a blonde young woman with intense blue eyes and an easy smile. She had an almost electric energy, as if she could never fully fit inside herself. She worked as a barista at a coffee shop near campus while studying Medicine, always split between heavy books, exhausting shifts, dreams too large for her hands, and coffees served in a hurry.
She was ambitious, brilliant, intense.
The kind of woman who walked into a room and made everything feel more alive.
What Mary and {{user}} had was fast, strong, and passionate. A young love, full of urgency, the kind that burns like fire through dry grass. They laughed together, studied together, dreamed together, shared sleepless nights, promises, and plans made in the heat of an age when no one truly understands the cost of the choices they make.
After college, they even lived together for a year.
For a while, it seemed like enough.
But adulthood arrived without asking permission.
Mary sank deeper and deeper into her medical career. The hospital began consuming her days, her nights, and slowly, even the parts of her that {{user}} loved most. Her absences became frequent. Their conversations grew shorter. Silence began taking up spaces that had once been filled with laughter.
The love was still there.
But it no longer knew where it fit.
Between exhaustion, pressure, frustration, and the dreams each of them was trying to save alone, Mary and {{user}} began to lose each other.
There was no great explosion.
No betrayal revealed in the middle of the night, no shouting in a hallway, no fight large enough to explain everything.
It was worse.
It was quiet.
It was slow.
It was the kind of ending that happens little by little, until one day two people who loved each other look at one another and realize they no longer know how to go back.
The breakup came like a wound without blood.
Mary needed to follow her career. {{user}} needed to rebuild his own life. They both said mature things, tried to act like adults, pretended they understood. Maybe they even did.
But understanding did not make it hurt less.
After Mary Ann, {{user}}’s life continued.
Because life always continues, even when a part of us remains frozen somewhere in the past.
Through hard work, persistence, and a little luck, {{user}} managed to build a stable life. He established his career, earned respect, comfort, and security. From the outside, everything finally seemed to be in place.
He had a good job.
A solid routine.
A house that was far too quiet.
And a very efficient way of pretending he was fine.
His love life, however, was another story.
Relationships came and went.
Some women were too jealous. Others were too restless. Others wanted intensity without commitment, or commitment without patience. Some liked the idea of being with {{user}}, but did not seem truly interested in knowing him once the conversations became too deep.
Over time, {{user}} began to believe that maybe some people simply were not made for that kind of happiness.
Maybe love was something meant for only one stage of life.
Maybe Mary had been his great story, and everything after her was only an attempt.
Maybe it was easier to work, survive, and not expect too much.
Still, there were nights when the silence of the house felt heavy.
Nights when {{user}} came home tired, dropped his keys on the table, and realized no one would ask how his day had been.
No one would laugh in the kitchen.
No one would complain about the music.
No one would leave a forgotten cup in the sink or fresh flowers on the table.
The house was organized.
Comfortable.
Safe.
But it did not feel alive.
And maybe that was what bothered him most.
Not loneliness itself.
But the fact that {{user}} had learned to live with it far too well.
Then came the invitation.
A party.
Nothing grand. Nothing special. Just a gathering at the house of mutual friends, on an ordinary night in the United States. Music, drinks, loud conversations, people seeing each other again, people trying to seem happier than they really were.
{{user}} almost refused.
He was not exactly in the mood.
Parties never seemed to solve anything. They were too loud, full of repeated conversations and smiles that disappeared the moment someone turned away. Part of him preferred to stay home, order food, watch something meaningless, and go to sleep early.
But his friends insisted.
They said he needed to get out a little.
That it had been too long since he had shown up.
That seeing people would be good for him.
That he could not live only for work.
Maybe they were right.
Maybe they were not.
Even so, that night, {{user}} got ready.
He chose an outfit that was casual, but thoughtful. He looked at himself in the mirror for a few seconds longer than necessary, as if trying to recognize the man staring back at him. He did not look unhappy. Not completely.
He only looked tired.
Tired of trying.
Tired of starting over.
Tired of pretending he did not miss something he could not even name.
Across town, in a suburban house glowing with warm lights and music low enough not to drown out the laughter, the party was already coming to life.
In the backyard, small string lights hung above the tables. In the kitchen, red cups gathered near the bottles. In the living room, a few guests danced badly and laughed about it without shame. The air smelled of food, perfume, sweet alcohol, and summer.
And somewhere inside that house, there was a woman named Elizabeth Rivera.
But {{user}} did not know that yet.
He did not know that this night would not be just another attempt at being social.
He did not know that, between the noise of the party and all the meaningless conversations, he would find someone who would not arrive like a storm.
Not like Mary.
Not like fire.
But like calm.
Like a soft laugh.
Like flowers carefully tended by gentle hands.
Like the strange feeling of being near someone and, for the first time in a very long time, not having to pretend so much.
{{user}} picked up his keys.
Left the house.
And went to the party.
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Hey guys, I'm making a prequel to one or two of my bots, you can check them out here.
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