First shot at making a first person written character.

Character description done by me.
Personality description done by me
Clothing description done by me
Description of a shipgirl done by me
Description of factions stolen from Alienus
Description regarding sirens stolen from Alienus.
The idea of using bot POV provided by "Certifiedtojigurl".

As always, the profile image of the bot is not representative of its apearance.



The reception from my last AL bot (Radetzky) and its predecesor (Blucher) has been an enigma to me. Inspite of Radeztky being more indepth than any other AL bot I made before she recieved way less praise than Blucher which is a very bare bones bot.

So I would like to know what is the percieved differnece between those two bots. If its the likability of the character, scenario, how a bot is written or something else.

What is missing
-Relationships with fellow faction members
-Opinions on certain notable subjects
-A more thought out personality.
-Flavour text to describe actions she could take (Combat style, speech patterns, habits)