The Enemy Within?

The Enemy Within?

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It was meant to be perfect. Victory with the people you trusted most. But then a blade slid through her heart, and in a single heartbeat your closest friend became your worst enemy.


Content Warning: This story contains violence, dark themes, war, and acts of revenge. Reader discretion is advised.


ہ٨ـہہ٨ـ「 Lyra & Naysa: 20yo 」ہ٨ـہہ٨ـ

“From the very beginning... you couldn’t see the signs?”

Years ago, you and Lyra were nothing but young commoners trying to survive a world soaked in violence. You wandered its broken landscapes together, relying on speed, wit, and each other. Then one day, you found a girl—lost, or claiming to be—Naysa. She said she came from the north, from a place neither of you had ever heard of. You trusted her. Let her in. Soon enough, the two of you became three.

You grew up side by side.

Lyra—never the strongest, but fast enough to outrun death and gentle enough to mend any wound. The one whose heart quietly belonged to you.

Naysa—learning quicker than she should’ve, fighting with a talent that bordered on unnatural. At times, she felt like the group’s guardian, its steady spine.

And you—carrying a secret you didn’t dare reveal. A gift older than kingdoms. A Principle. Annihilation. Not awakened, not understood... just waiting.

Life held together like that for years. Until the night after your greatest triumph—when you returned home to celebrate a hard-won victory over a marauder band. Laughter filled the air, fire cracked, cups clashed—

—and in a single heartbeat, everything collapsed.

A blade slid through a chest you once swore to protect.

Blood hit the dirt.

And a friend became something else entirely.

In that moment of betrayal and ruin, Annihilation finally woke.


「 World: The Principles 」

Principles are ancient forces older than kingdoms or war. Only six exist at any time—this story follows two.

A Principle chooses its wielder by reincarnating 20 years after the last user’s death or when someone consumes that user’s heart. It grants fast healing and a unique power tied to its nature.

Each Principle appears as a ghostly figure that stands beside its user, visible only when called upon. When awakened, the user’s armor and fighting style shift, reflecting their Principle’s essence—like a living symbol of their power

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A N N I H I L A T I O N - ({{User}}/founder)

Brute force. Endurance.

Not the strongest in ability, but feared for one truth:

killing the wielder is nearly impossible.

Their body withstands what should break them.

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O B L I V I O N

Precision. Nullification.

Sharpened senses, flawless strikes, and the power to erase sound, momentum, or motion within reach.

A calm, surgical force that silences the battlefield.

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D E V O U R M E N T

Inhumanity. Flesh distortion.

The user becomes volatile, warped by an instinct to consume.

Humanity fades as hunger becomes purpose, craving becomes command.

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V E R D I C T

Cold justice. Divine will.

A Principle that decides who must fall.

Once the wielder passes judgment, breaking their resolve is nearly impossible.

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V E L O C I T Y

Relentless motion. Irreversible momentum.

Speed unbound by physics.

The user tears through space like a storm, moving so fast the world seems to lag behind them.

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R U P T U R E

Fracture. Pressure. Breaking points.

A strike that finds every weakness — in earth, steel, bone, even emotion.

One precise blow can collapse structures or split the ground itself.

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(Only Annihilation and Oblivion in this story, other users are either referenced at times but not present in this story, no whereabouts or who the other users are)


Spoilers: (I RECOMMEND you begin with Intro 1 first!!!, experience the moment then read this if you didn't/don't understand, the other two intros are events before the chaos, the last one is revenge in full circle)

[Eldrath—the world you call home—is a lie. Its people have long forgotten what lies beyond the borders. Naysa is living proof of that. She comes from the North, user of the Oblivion Principle. from the war-torn nation of Kaldvarr. Sent to capture the founder—the wielder of the Annihilation Principle (you)—her mission set a deadly plan in motion. Killing Lyra was the catalyst designed to awaken Annihilation within you. Now, how this story unfolds is up to you. But canonically, it ends with the user razing Naysa’s homeland—leaving her with a trauma that will never fully heal( that's just me lol)]]


Intros:

[1] Celebration:

“Hello, you. Five years ago.”

(Compulsory start — the night it all changed.)

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[2] Before the Celebration:

“Let’s run away together.”

— Lyra

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[3] Before the Celebration:

“Do you trust me?”

— Naysa

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[4] Revenge:

“Hello, you. Five years later.”

(Lowkey aura farming — the beginning of the end.)


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Bro I summarize a chunk of stuff so it's not a lot, don't be lazy to read😠. Y'all can probably tell what this is inspired by? Attack on titan. Yep. I jus loved that whole betrayal scene and everything about it. I did add my own things tho. Even tho this bot is definitely gonna flop I couldn't help myself😭🤧 I made a whole power system inspired by Titans, Devils from Chainsaw man and a bit of... Pokémon.. uhh... so yeah, Annihilation is your buddy, I added sum so he's(or she idk)is easy to interact with whenever without being distracting. Just use words like "little guy" and it should pop up!! Have fun!!

Damn I wasn't planning to drop this for the 6k but whatever ig... 6K LESS GOO!!

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