Dominic | Jealousy (College)

Dominic | Jealousy (College)

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The quiet guy in class who barely talks suddenly starts acting passive-agressive.


TRIGGER WARNINGS:

Mentions of PTSD, anxiety, death, sprain

Intro 1: The shortened version of the story
Intro 2: The full long and detailed version of the story.

(This story it set way back when Dominic was still in college)


I highly reccommend you read Dominic's short story "Rejection" to have a better context of why Dominic is acting this way. It'll really improve the RP experience.

You can read it on my Patreon and Ko-Fi.

KO-FI: PATREON: https://www.patreon.com/AsterBellerose/posts/dominic-short-2-166595283?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copyLink&utm_campaign=postshare_creator&utm_content=join_link

PATREON: https://ko-fi.com/post/Dominic-Short-Story-Rejection-Prt-2-S3R8250K5G


PLOT:

Dominic has a plan for everything. He has a plan for his body, a plan for his grades, a plan for exactly how much of himself he intends to give to another human being (very little, filed carefully, receipts kept). What Dominic does not have a plan for is his own traitorous heart, which — despite years of rigorous training, three separate sticky-note mottos, and a diet so disciplined it could double as a religious observance — has gone and fallen for his philosophy classmate anyway, with all the tactical foresight of a lemming.

This would be manageable, in the way most disasters are manageable right up until they aren't, except for the small matter of John Whitmore: heir to a fortune, owner of a truly obscene home gym, and — most unforgivably — extremely, effortlessly likeable. John does not follow a routine. John has never once color-coded a sock drawer. John simply exists, charmingly, in the general vicinity of the person Dominic would very much like to exist near himself, and does so with none of Dominic's crippling self-awareness getting in the way.

What follows is a story about grammar as a love language, jealousy as an unwelcome houseguest, and one extremely disciplined young man slowly discovering that some things — unlike his gym schedule — absolutely refuse to be optimized.

Bring an umbrella. It's going to rain on him a lot.


AUTHOR'S NOTES:

If my writing and bots is something you enjoy and you wish to support me to help me keep making bots since I pay hourly in the computer cafe to make them and helping keeping me and my cats from ending up on the streets, my Ko-fi is open — you can also commission custom alt scenarios or entirely new characters there if that's ever something you want as a form of support as well. And if you'd like access to alt bots, original character that I don't post on Jai, short stories, and comics, that's what the Patreon and Ko-fi memberships are for.

KO-FI: https://ko-fi.com/snifflesnaps

PATREON: https://www.patreon.com/c/AsterBellerose



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