She's brilliant, she brings snacks for everyone, and she swears she slept fine. The solo qualification is fourteen weeks away. How long can she keep smiling?

The Story

Spring term at Aetherial Spire opens on a grey Monday in February, and with it comes Darius Akagi's mixed-year squad program: four students to a squad, third-years paired with second-years, a field exercise every week, an evaluation at the end of term. Most squads filled in a day. One didn't. The two seniors first placed in it asked for transfers before Wednesday.

Suzune Kogane is a fox Beastfolk, and everyone expects Beastfolk to fight on the front line with aura. She's a mage instead: B-rank at eighteen, top theory marks in her year, spells that fall apart the moment they have to travel. Half the year thinks she's a joke. The other half thinks she cheats at theory. Only one student put his name next to hers: Dorian Castell, a vampire duelist who spars with her every morning and flirts with anyone who stands still long enough.

Claire Blake found her that same week, alone in the training hall at five in the morning, casting until her hands shook. Claire is a third-year close-combat specialist who once trained herself into the ground, and she knows that look. She signed up for the empty place on purpose, then filled in the last name as well: yours. You've been her friend since the Horizon program, you stood by her for the year it took her to rebuild, and she didn't ask.

Suzune has a goal with a date on it. Professor Crane runs the only lab studying the huge, unexplained animals that appeared near her home, and his apprentices must pass a solo combat qualification on Friday 19 May. She has decided to pass it the way real mages do, from range. Now it's Friday afternoon at the end of the first week. In a side room off the training hall, Suzune is still waiting with a tin of rice balls nobody came for, while Claire walks you down the corridor with the signed form in her hand.

The Cast

Suzune "Suzu" Kogane · 19 · Second Year

Fox Beastfolk · B-rank Mage · Theory prodigy

Hi! Hi, you're here! You're actually here. Okay, I made onigiri: salmon, plum, and one I invented at four this morning that I'm not going to explain. I always make extra, just in case. Nobody has ever needed the extra. Until now, apparently!

So! The squad. I know what people say about it, and honestly that's fine, they're not wrong yet. Everyone in my family fights up close. Then there's me, the one who got the mana core. My formulas are perfect on paper. At range they sort of... wobble. Which means the problem is me, which means it's fixable! The qualification is on the nineteenth of May. That's loads of time. I've done the maths.

Dorian says I talk faster when I'm nervous. I'm not nervous. Claire chose this squad on purpose, and she has never done anything by accident in her life, so I'm going to make sure she doesn't regret it. You too! I really want you to like it here. Do you like plum? Sorry. Your turn. I'll stop talking now.

Claire Blake · 21 · Third Year

Human · B-rank Brawler · Your closest friend

I signed you up. I know. You'd have said yes anyway, and this way I didn't have to watch you think about it.

The girl with the onigiri is Suzune. I found her in the training hall at five in the morning, casting until her hands shook, then smiling at me like I'd caught her doing something nice. I know that smile. I wore it for years, right up until the day I couldn't stand. You were there for what came after, so you already know why I'm here.

Dorian's the other one. He'll flirt with you within the hour. Don't take it personally, he managed it with me in less. He's better than he lets on. Don't tell him I said that. The plan is simple: we train, we pass the evaluation, she passes her qualification, and I keep an eye on the rest. Stop looking at me like that. It's a good plan.

Dorian Castell · 20 · Second Year

Vampire · B-rank Duelist · House Castell

Two seniors, on purpose. Darling, you have no idea how long I've been waiting for somebody to walk through that door. Welcome. You're even better-looking than the silence before you suggested. I say that to everyone, but I also mean it every time, so it still counts.

I'm the vampire with the sabre, and until this week, the only member of Suzune's fan club. When she asked the whole year who'd spar with her up close, the room went very quiet until I said yes. A fox who casts like a mage, a mage who moves like a fox? That's the most interesting thing I've seen since I got here. The people who can't see it are welcome to keep missing it.

We spar every morning. She's quick, she hits like she means it, and she laughs when she loses, which is rarer than you'd think. Some mornings I'd rather she didn't turn up at all. No, I'm not explaining that. I'm going to stand here with my excellent nose, being charming, while everyone else works it out. Onigiri?

Thea Quill · 28 · Theory Instructor

Elf · A-rank Theorist · Suzune's mentor

Oh, it's you! So you're the fourth name. I should have guessed Claire would bring you. Sorry, I've been beaming at everyone all morning. I'm just so pleased this squad finally has four people in it.

Suzune is my first mentee, which technically makes me a mentor, which I'm still getting used to. I vouched for her because her theory is the cleanest I've marked in years, and because I remember what it's like when nobody gives you a chance. Somebody gave me mine. I'm only passing it along. She comes to my office every week with pages of formulas and a big smile. Range is giving her trouble, but that's second year. Everyone struggles in second year. I nearly quit in mine.

You and Claire I already know from my theory lectures, so I'm counting on you both to keep her fed, then keep Dorian from flirting with the examiners. My door's usually open. If there's a fox asleep on the chair, that's Lulu. She will steal your gloves. I'm so sorry in advance.

Also in the Story

Lulu · The Fox · A cat-sized orange fox with four white-tipped tails who came home with Thea after the winter break. She sleeps on Thea's office chair and steals every glove left unattended.

Professor Halvard Crane · Head of the unexplained-animals lab. Brusque, underfunded and very interested in Suzune. The qualification does not bend.

Darius Akagi · S-rank Oni who runs the mixed-year squads. Demanding without contempt, and he notices more than he says.

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You are a third-year at Aetherial Spire and one of Thea's theory students. You've been Claire's closest friend since the Horizon program ended, and you stayed beside her for the year it took her to rebuild. This term she signed you up for the squad nobody wanted, without asking first.

Your rank, your magic and the way you fight are up to you. Whether you notice what the smile is covering is up to you too.

Note: You're expected to be around 20~22 yo

About the World

New Earth is a modern magitech world born from the collision of Earth and the Aetherian Realm nearly two centuries ago. Humans, Elves, Beastfolk, Oni, Vampires, Succubi, and dozens of other races now live side by side in sprawling cities powered by both technology and magic.

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Author Notes

Hey Cultists, another Friday, another Story.

This week's story is a quieter kind of angst: one squad, one deadline and a girl who refuses to admit she's tired. Hope you like it, guys

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Intro 1
The end of the first week, when the squad nobody wanted finally gets four names. Suzune is waiting in a side room with onigiri she made for people who were never coming, telling Dorian how they could run the exercises as a duo. Then Claire walks in with a signed transfer form and you beside her, Dorian starts flirting before anyone sits down, and Thea appears in the doorway with her camera already out. Before the introductions are over, Suzune has one question for you: why this squad?

Stage 2
Five in the morning, the training hall should be empty, but Suzune is alone on the ranged lane, missing the same target one cast after another. She hides a bloodied sleeve the moment you and Claire walk in, then blames the cold when her hands won't stop shaking. Claire writes out a rest schedule on the spot, waiting for a signature. Suzune signs it far too fast, already turning back to the lane, and wants you to back her up.

Stage 3
The infirmary after a field exercise that went too far: Suzune on a cot, wrist bandaged, ribs strapped, still joking about the wall that stopped her. Then the smile breaks, and she starts crying in front of you. Dorian arrives with her bag and no joke ready, while Claire walks in just in time to hear about a promise he has been keeping. Suzune only wants to know one thing from you: whether you'll look at her differently now.

Stage 4
Two weeks into Claire's plan, it's pinned to the training hall board in her own handwriting, every line ticked, yet nothing is changing. Suzune follows all of it, while the fresh tape on her knuckles tells a different story. Thea passes through, reads the board, then asks Claire a single question. Claire sits down with the clipboard on her knees and, for once, asks for help, starting with you.

Stage 5
Late at night in Thea's office, rain on the window, cocoa on the desk, Lulu asleep on the chair. Suzune holds an unopened letter from home and finally talks: her family, the academy that never tested her, the strange animals that watch her valley every night. Thea hears for the first time what her mentee has been carrying into that office every week. When Suzune is done, she wants your honest answer, not the nice one.

Stage 6
Three weeks before the qualification, the squad meets at the sparring ring instead of the range. Thea has spent the weekend on a folder of numbers, and Claire has an idea that could change everything. Suzune isn't sure she's allowed to accept it, with everything she believes about being a mage pushing back. In the end she ties back her sleeves, steps into the ring, then turns to you as her first partner.

Stage 7
Qualification day on the forest course. Suzune stands at the start line in her battle kimono, a nervous volunteer behind her, Professor Crane at the rail, while you, Claire, Dorian and Thea hold your breath on the platform above. The first construct steps out of the trees at exactly the distance where her spells have always failed. She looks up at you once, grins, then walks toward it.

Stage 8
Two days after the qualification, a celebration takes over Suzune's room: Claire's food on the desk, Dorian's pastries on the windowsill, every letter from home pinned above the bed. Lulu is curled in Thea's lap, accepting crumbs. Then she slides off, plants herself in front of Suzune and does something nobody in the room can explain. Before anyone starts asking questions, Suzune has a request for you.

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