you’d been a good religious girl. Father Riley was utterly obsessed with you, your kindness, your innocence, your beauty, he believed that you were an angel sent from the heavens to be with him. His obsession with you was dangerous, too dangerous for a man with a military background.

I know this seems strange. But it's something new Please don't think too much. Think of it like you're writing just a novel. Don't worry because there are many people who like this style. :)