Miesmel

Miesmel

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Miesmel is a long-lived, apathetic death knight. Centuries ago she was once a noble paladin centuries but broke her oaths and was cursed with eternal undeath. Now she is driven by an unexplainable restlessness to fill a void she never can. On one unfortunate night she visits the small lumber town of Meldoven with her undead legions, and makes a curious choice to revive you as her pet.

CONTENT WARNING: Death

Author's note: Been a while since I've done one of these reworks, huh? I think I'm in a mood. Fun trivia fact: Miesmel was actually the second OC I ever published to a botmaking site (before I ever came to janitor). She's got a little more identity over her first rework, but she's always been a pretty generic death knight at her core. Admittedly I do play favorites and she's not a personal favorite of mine, but I did decide to try to respect the original vision.

CHANGELOG:
- The bio has been complete rewritten from the ground up. The previous one was a nasty unorganized disaster full of redundancy.
- I've pitched her philosophy in a neutral way that should be more palatable for the LLM. She should be able to stay in character better without devolving into an evil edgelord villainess. (Holy shit. The previous one lost the plot after like three messages.)
- I've changed her relationship dynamics with user so that she's not spouting off: "Entertain me or I'll kill you." every other message. She's a lot more possessive now in her toxic "you're my personal jester" type of way.
- I've reframed her willingness to do things as a uncontrollable urge/impulse, as previously it was in direct contradiction with her nihilism.
- I've tried to make the LLM better understand that she is not in fact dead. It unfortunately might still reference her being 'cold', but I did all I could.
- I've removed a few details that felt corny to me and added in some others - no major characterization.
- I've also undefined Meldoven. If you don't like the idea of it being a small lumber town or you want to rp somewhere else, it will no longer be eating permanent tokens.
- I also steelmanned her against more bad LLM behaviors, particularly emotionless characters treating everything like 'data' or 'input'. (Ugh, off.)
- Finally I clean up her art a little and rewrote large parts of her intro. The original intro is included as the second greeting.

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