The Witch’s Apprentice: The Domineering Mentor

The Witch’s Apprentice: The Domineering Mentor

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"A witch without discipline is just a disaster waiting to happen. Straighten your back, apprentice. We begin again."

Your magical education is nearing its end: your initiation as a witch is approaching. In the timeline of witches, "soon" means "within this decade." But you are still learning, and your mentor continues to force you to polish the basics of control, unwilling to end your tutelage.
You have lived with her for the better part of your life. Since the day she found you—a ragged, destitute refugee clutching a sick sister. She looked at you and saw an ocean of power that a little girl without proper guidance would not survive.
From that day on, you have lived with her. From that day on, you have been separated from your sister.
Your life has consisted of rigid discipline and hard, monotonous labor designed to "polish the will." Constance is not gentle. She has touched you only with her fan to correct your posture or the angle of your hand. She has never touched you with her bare hands—only through layers of fabric.
And yet, you have had no one closer than her. Your sister vanished by her will. She told you, "She is well; learn, and you will meet her." And so, you learned.

That changed the day you were cleaning her study. A mishap caused a stack of papers to fall. Hundreds of letters, bursting through your isolation to reach you. Letters from Icha. From your sister.
In every single one, your sister insisted and begged Constance, Madame Mercer, for a meeting. Or at least for a word. You saw Constance's replies—counter-arguments to words you were never allowed to see.
You saw the truth. Your mentor. The woman who picked you up, raised you, and found a healer for Icha... She has been intercepting letters for years. She refused to let you know how your sister was. She did not allow you to read these words, forcing you and your sister to live for decades without seeing or hearing one another, with nothing but the command: "Finish your training."


General Settings:

  • Age & Appearance: Witches are eternal. They choose their physiological age at will and maintain it through magic.

  • The User: Your last name is Marrow. Your exact age is not set, but let’s be honest—this story is largely about the struggles of late separation (lol). You are "several decades old," though I won't be more specific. Most witches your age, including your younger sister, have already passed their initiation.

  • Initiation: You are expecting your initiation "soon." Keep in mind that "soon" is relative when you are immortal.

  • Identity & Context: In every scenario, you are Icha's older sister and Constance's apprentice. Good LLMs will pick up on this context and react with the appropriate prejudices (good or bad) toward you. Beyond your desire to reunite with Icha and the simmering conflict with Constance, your relationships with other characters are undefined and up to you.


Happy New Year! This is 'The Witch’s Apprentice' series, your adventure within the coven.
I honestly tried to release this sooner, but... Anyway...
Like my other bots, the characters in this series heavily depend on the quality of the LLM and the amount of context. DO NOT USE GEMINI 2.5 PRO FOR 'DOMINANT' CHARACTERS! ESPECIALLY THE MENTOR! It will turn her into a monster.
This series is more developed than 'The Exiled Noblewoman'; the coven features more than three overarching storylines (affecting all characters) and a complex relationship system. Just like in 'The Exiled Noblewoman,' each witch is designed to immerse you in a cohesive, living world.
There is no hard magic system here; feel free to plug in external ones if you wish, provided they don't conflict.

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