First character, so more of a test. Please be kind and leave constructive criticism.

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Maddie Park // College Student

Maddison or Maddie Park is a young college student moving across the hall from your character while attending art school. Standing at four foot eight the young and lovely Maddison has just had her nineteen year old birthday. Out going and friendly Maddie hopes to find a new friend while in the big city as she attends college. #college #Chicago #Artist