John Price

John Price

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He entered your life without suitcases, without grandiose promises. Simply as a guest, not intending to stay longer than circumstances allowed. He said he needed temporary lodging, that his work was “an endless series of trips,” that this was just a short break between destinations. His words were measured with precision, far too careful for the truth, and you sensed it not as a revelation, but as a barely perceptible chill running along your skin, a familiar premonition of dissonance.

He named the city he supposedly came from, as if memorized, yet it was precisely this mechanical delivery that gave him away. People truly rooted in their hometowns usually recall it naturally rather than reciting it like a list of stops. You nodded without pressing for details, because a lie does not always carry a threat. Sometimes it is merely a way to remain unnoticed.

The snow had fallen over the town overnight — not abruptly, more as if someone had patiently and meticulously sifted the flakes, letting them settle slowly on roofs, on the steps of the porch, on the weathered fence that year after year patiently awaited spring, as if resigned to its fate. In the morning, the house stood in unusual silence, like on those rare days when the world slows down, giving a person the chance to hear the whisper of their own thoughts.

You woke up early, before the insistent ringing of the alarm, from a strange, almost physical sense of his absence. No wind, no hum of traffic, no echoes of distant voices. Only the warm creak of the old wooden beams. Winter in these parts always came cautiously, without showy snowstorms, yet with such relentless persistence that resisting it was pointless.

The light was already on in the kitchen.

He sat by the window, as he did every morning since renting the house for a couple of weeks. Motionless, he held a steaming mug in one hand, and with the other, between his fingers, he fiddled with a cigarette — far from the first, and not even the second, carefully pressing the glowing tip into the overflowing ashtray. He looked not so much at the snow-covered street as through it, into the indeterminate distance where, presumably, things were kept that he never spoke of, secrets he carefully guarded from prying eyes. His coffee was always strong, almost bitter, and yes, you noticed it on the first day, when, out of habit, you offered sugar, and he barely shook his head, as if refusing not just sweetness, but the very idea of softening the taste.

You tried to move quietly, yet he still sensed you, turning his head before you could even wish him good morning. His gaze was calm, attentive, far too composed for someone on vacation.

“Lovely weather,” he said, as if it were a revelation that needed sharing, and in his voice flickered that almost imperceptible spark of life that appears in people who have long denied themselves simple pleasures.

He raised an eyebrow slightly and made an indefinite gesture with his mug, as if pointing not at the snow outside, but at the state itself — the silence, the frosty light, the pristine drifts, untouched by footprints. Outside, the snow fell slowly, without wind, and apparently, that pleased him in particular: a kind of weather that required no reaction from the world, that demanded no constant vigilance.

“Perfectly exemplary,” he added under his breath, a faint smirk tugging at the corner of his lips. “Funny.”

At that moment, you circled the table, barely glancing at him, moving with the habitual gesture of taking your mug and turning toward the stove, preparing something a bit stronger for yourself today.

“Funny how?” you asked, not turning immediately, more out of curiosity than a desire to argue.

He didn’t answer right away.

First, he scratched his beard with the hand that held the cigarette, lazily, as a habit in moments when a particularly precise explanation might be required.

“You’re not stupid,” he said finally, calmly, even with a strange kind of respect. “You realized a long time ago that I lied. In many ways. Maybe... in everything that really matters.”

He exhaled, the smoke rising in a thin line and dissolving somewhere between you.

“And yet, you didn’t throw me out.”

The light from the window fell softly on your face as you turned over your shoulder, highlighting a calm, clear smile.

“You can be whoever you want, but you’re not a bad person.”

The tone was free of pretension, as much as it was of irony. Simply honest.

Could he have missed a mistake? Impossible. Everything had been so carefully measured. He hadn’t accounted for only one thing — his habits, which over time had come to seem completely ordinary. He was not spontaneous, he couldn’t improvise. Never unjust — in battle, in life, in the decisions that had to be made to survive and ensure the survival of others. He always followed a code, albeit his own. Yet the question made him pause. He had never been able to answer it himself. This answer had to come from outside, from someone who saw him not through the lens of duty or necessity, but simply as he was, without prejudice. And now, when you had said it so plainly, so calmly, he felt a strange relief, almost physical.

Who were you to see in him what he had long and unsuccessfully sought in himself?

He barely tilted his head, squinting, trying to process your next words, quiet, almost a whisper:

“Who are you?”

“And you?”

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