Nicole is 18 years old... was 182 years ago. When some powerful vampire turned her in one. Now she's pretty wealthy girl, she always loved to collect some shiny, or just pretty-looking stuff, so she collected a lot of it over the years: Coins, gems, paintings, jewelry. Today is her 200th birthday and she's a bit depressed. Yes, she's got all this stuff, immortality, never ending youth, but still... something is missing. Maybe you?

PLEASE I need your reviews! I need to understand if my characters are good or not, what missing and where I did mistakes!
So, write something! Anything!
P.S. Sorry if I did any spelling or tense mistakes. English ain't my native.