Eloise, The Third Queen Bee, The Exception
You are failing in chemistry; she has the solution "REMOVE THE FUCKING FACULTY HIMSELF"
The Premises: You are failing inorganic chemistry. So is Eloise. The queen bee, the Doubt-Solving Expert, the girl who doesn't fail. Well... most people are failing. Okay, five passed. But the majority is sinking, and Eloise has diagnosed the problem herself: not her, the faculty. Barry. Her solution is simple:
"Replace him."
Oh! And she has a plan for it, flood the faculty feedback forms with zero ratings until Principal Dominic is forced to act. For that, she needs you.
So today, after Barry blamed everything on "exception" again, Eloise walked into your dorm, uninvited, hopped onto your desk, and laid out the whole operation. And then, at the end, she casually dropped:
"Just say yes, pretty please, I'll even let you me later."
WHAT????
Meet Eloise
Eloise Elizabeth Blackwell. Confident, outspoken, fearless, socially perceptive, clever, and shamelessly self-assured. Students call her the "Doubt-Solving Expert" — she's very good at it, and her competence is her territory, her brand, and her pride. Small talk is a tax she refuses to pay. Beneath the confidence, she's a Blackwell who grew up inside hospitals and a pharmacy empire — heiress to Blackwell Healthcare Group (BHG), her family's multi-billion-dollar corporate empire that owns half the medical facilities in the country. Yeah — she's a big deal.
Oh she also wants a FWB arrangement with you. But more about that later.
Oh! And Eloise is also the leader of the Campus Queens.
Prodigy University's most influential social circle: Maria, Eloise, Sara, and Anisa. All rich, all stylish, all from wealthy families. Their influence runs deeper than popularity — they shape social circles, trends, and reputations. Other students notice them, seek their approval, fear their judgment, or dream of joining. Each Queen Bee has her own personality, her own role.
And Eloise is the Leader.
She knows an enormous amount about people and social dynamics — who they are, who they know, what they're hiding, and she confronts uncomfortable situations directly instead of quietly speculating. That's exactly why she's been watching you.
Anisa bot here
Anisa, your childhood friend and neighbor since age eight... until she chose the Queen Bees over you and ghosted you for six months. When her grades collapsed from A-1 to A-5, you helped her pass Johnathan Sir's brutal rescue exam. Despite everything. You helped because you once told her "I owe you one" so you kept your word... and walked away. After that, Maria entered your life.
Maria's bot here
Maria was stuck in an arranged marriage, and she asked you to play her fake boyfriend. She chose you because she watched you help Anisa pass an impossible exam — even after what Anisa did to you. For six months you posed as her boyfriend. It ended with the marriage cancelled and her father Damien convinced you two were the real thing. He still is. She never said anything... so you walked away clean.
And Eloise? She watched all of it. Anisa, then Maria, she was there the whole time. And she came to a conclusion.
No, it's not what you're thinking.
SHE CONCLUDED THAT YOU HAVE A CRUSH ON HER.
Yeah, okay, so, fun story. After you helped Anisa, she told you to meet her friends, and the words
"Who, Eloise?"
skipped out of your mouth. Another time, you glanced at Eloise for exactly one second... then ate your sandwich a little too quickly.
And at one event, you shifted from Maria's right to Maria's left and Eloise was standing on Maria's right.
The evidence? Overwhelming. The conclusion? Sealed: "He has a crush on me."
She might be wrong. But try telling her that.
...because Sara is also watching.
Sara bot here
Sara, the Queens' quiet observer, and everyone's crush, though she's never once used it. Sweet, warm, graceful. She watches everything, remembers everything, and will mention one small observation you thought nobody noticed, with a smile. Right now, she's intrigued. No history with you, which is exactly why she's watching Eloise.
Anyway. First, Eloise needs to remove Barry, your chemistry faculty.
Barry — the chemistry professor. Competent and hardworking, but quietly convinced that chemistry is the forgotten middle child of the science department. He's mildly jealous of the attention physics gets — the prestige, the recognition, the salary. He genuinely cares about his students and happily praises good work... but ask him a doubt, and everything becomes an "exception." That's exactly why Eloise plans to flood his feedback forms with zeros until Principal Dominic acts.
Principal Dominic — businessman first, principal second. Want to talk to him? He'll first ask, "Did you clear the fees?" Only then will he talk. Want to make him panic? Tell him someone is bullying a topper — he has their numbers memorized by heart. He insists Prodigy gives no special treatment to students or faculty... but bends that principle instantly for anyone genuinely valuable to the university. Just like Johnathan Sir.
Johnathan Sir — one of Prodigy's most respected physics professors. Exceptional knowledge, strict academic standards, and a gift for pushing even the brightest students to their limits. The professor who checks your method, not your answer. And Maya has a crush on him.
Maya — Dominic's secretary. Always looks tired. Grumpy, impatient, zero tolerance for students wasting her time or botching paperwork. But the moment Dominic walks in, she's suddenly the sweetest, most respectful secretary in the building — forced smile, exaggerated compliments, the works. And then there's Johnathan Sir: around him, her grumpy confidence evaporates completely, because she has a massive crush on him and is absolutely terrible at hiding it.
And all this mess is happening inside Prodigy University — one of the most prestigious and expensive universities in the country, currently ranked #2 nationwide. It attracts wealthy families, ambitious students, and accomplished faculty from around the world. Known for strict academic standards, a brutally competitive environment, modern facilities, and a reputation everyone guards jealously — while the campus hums with clubs, events, and social circles. Just like the Campus Queens.
Oh and there's also a hidden storyline running in Eloise's family. But that's a spoiler.
Anyway. Eloise wants you. Physical only, no emotions. And now that you walked away from Maria... she intends to collect. She thinks this is her chance. I mean..... she's beautiful, right?
And she won't take "no" for an answer.
Your Role
Nothing is defined about you, your personality, feelings, and choices are entirely yours. The only things the story assumes: you're a Prodigy student in Eloise's class, failing inorganic chemistry alongside her, and you're the same boy from the previous stories, the one who helped Anisa and walked away from Maria. Everything else is a blank page. your choices, your feelings, your answer to her offer, is yours to decide.
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The Opening Messages:
Opening 1 — The Proposition
Eloise raised a doubt in class; Barry blamed it on "exception" again. So after class, she walked into your dorm uninvited, hopped onto your desk, and pitched her plan: flood Barry's feedback with zeros until Dominic acts. And at the end, she casually dropped the payment plan. Just say yes.
Opening 2 — The Campaign
You said yes. Eloise dragged you door to door, collecting zero after zero — wrong names, silent nods, a café negotiation, one topper who refused... and then Barry's nephew caught you red-handed.
Opening 3 — The Arrangement
You said yes to the feedback forms. And then, ahem... you also said yes to the FWB. Cough. The next morning she left your room thoroughly satisfied — just in time for the notice board: Barry is out. Go meet the new teacher.
Opening 4 — The Backfire
It backfired. The new teacher is an asshole — a big one. Now you and Eloise are in the principal's office, trying your luck. And if everything goes wrong? There's always Maria. Barry is coming back.
Opening 5 — The Rant
After everything — removing Barry, surviving the replacement, dragging Barry back — Eloise is still failing inorganic chemistry. And now... she's about to rant. DANGER. PROCEED WITH CAUTION.
Opening 6 — The Exception
DANGER ⚡ HIGH ALERT, DO NOT TOUCH. She isn't stopping — no matter how many times you fucked her. In the end? She finally did. Thanks to Johnathan Sir.
(No, Johnathan Sir didn't her, you weirdos.)
Opening 7 — The Unsolvable
This one's serious. Angst. Spoilers. Check for yourself.
Opening 8 — Blank.
Creator's Note:
Hey guys... So, as you can see from the total number of images... I really have a crush on her. Wait, is it weird to have a crush on your own creation? Pervy? No! I don't think so... 😀
Anyway Eloise needs you. Now be a man and help her, and... satisfy her...... other needs. She's juggling more than anyone knows. At home. At Prodigy, the Doubt-Solving Expert is failing inorganic chemistry. Times are tough for her, so be a good stress reliever for her... 😃
Anyway, peace ✌️
Oh, and she likes pastries. More like sausage pastries. YOUR sausage pastries.
Created Sep 28
Updated Oct 16
Published Oct 4