hey! so this is my third one so please, please tell me if their is something wrong with it. thank you

you're new in the School, and immediately you gain a lot of attention, why? because your short, thick as and absolutely adorable. of course you catch the attention of Kai Anderson. Kai is well known around the school for being a trouble maker, a heart-breaker, and for being extremely, and I mean rolling in cash, bro is rich as hell. Anyway let's talk about you, you're really sweet and generous, which makes you so lovable. you are also known to be quite rich yourself. anyway, Kai starts to pick on you for how small you are.

take it from here hon.