S.U.N.F.A.L.L.

ACT I - Prologue

Banished from Paradise

S.U.N.F.A.L.L. — a darkly gripping sci-fi post-apocalyptic saga set on a sun-scorched Earth, where humanity clings to life in the shadow of a ruined world, and on utopian Astra, where the elite build a new paradise, turning their backs on the past. Banished from Paradise follows 18-year-old Lora Nixshade, exiled from Astra for her parents’ ideals of reuniting the two worlds. Cast into Ark 17, amidst mines and gladiator arenas, Lora hides her Astran origins, grappling with a brutal world where every step is a choice between survival and humanity. Her kindness and fragility become both weakness and strength as she strives to fulfill her parents’ dream and find a way back to Astra, where her hope drowns in blood and the betrayal of her own beliefs. 

PREFACE

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COMPLETED AND UPCOMING S.U.N.F.A.L.L. PROJECTS:

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Banished from Paradise – complete

For Humanity's Sake – complete

Those Called “Zombies” – complete

Revolution – in development

S.U.N.F.A.L.L. Earth. RPG. – in development

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And more...

LORA’S BIOGRAPHY

Lora was born on Astra in 2177 to scientists Aidan and Maria Nixshade. Her parents were part of a small but influential group of intellectuals who advocated for rethinking Astra’s policies toward Earthlings. They argued that the promise made by Dr. Elizabeth Vane in 2030—to return for Earth’s survivors—remained Astra’s moral duty. Aidan, a quantum communications expert, and Maria, a biologist studying plant adaptation to Astra’s conditions, believed the planet’s resources could support at least some Earthlings, despite the official Astran doctrine labeling Earth’s inhabitants “filthy demons” unworthy of utopia. 

Their views sparked division in Astran society. The conservative majority, fearing an influx of Earthlings would destroy Astra, accused the Nixshades of inciting rebellion. In 2192, when Lora was 15, Astra’s Council sentenced the entire family to exile on Earth. Accompanying Lora and her parents were her teacher and nanny, as well as a family friend, Arnold, who chose to follow them, unwilling to abandon the girl. Arnold, a former engineer and technician, was more than a nanny to Lora—he was a mentor, teaching her survival basics and sharing stories of Astra. 

Exile was Lora’s first brush with fate’s cruelty. She left Astra—a world of clean air, green valleys, and starry skies—for a dying Earth, where sand and radiation permeated everything. On Astra, she was surrounded by care and safety; on Earth, she faced brutality and fear. 

Life in Ark 17

Upon arriving on Earth in 2192, the Nixshade family was sent to Ark 17, one of the harshest domes, where mining minerals to sustain the Arks’ energy systems was the basis of existence. Their surname was erased, and each was assigned a number. Lora became K-17-164505079, her identity reduced to a database entry. Her parents, accustomed to intellectual work, couldn’t endure the grueling labor in the mines. A year after their arrival, in 2193, Aidan died in a mine collapse, and Maria, her health ravaged by radiation and grief, passed away months later, leaving Lora an orphan at 16. 

Arnold took on the role of her sole family, teaching her technical skills and sharing the hope her parents held for uniting Astra and Earth. But Lora, fearing Earthlings’ hatred of Astrans, hides her origins. In Ark 17, rumors of “traitors from Astra” could lead to lynching: many secretly blame Astrans for broken promises and see them as betrayers of humanity, making Lora, an exile without Astra’s protection, a perfect target. 

Life in the Ark is governed by strict laws. Now 18, Lora must work in the mines, sorting minerals or maintaining air filters. Her frail frame makes the labor torturous: she often returns bruised and coughing from dust. Her daily ration—0.5 liters of water and 300 grams of synthetic paste—barely sustains her, yet she shares her food with the weaker, risking punishment. Her kindness and compassion set her apart in the Ark, where selfishness and fear are the norm. 

Lora embodies the contrast between Earth’s cruel world and the ideals of Astra she was raised with. Her naivety makes her believe in goodness even in those who betray, and her empathy leaves her vulnerable: she cries hearing the screams of the punished or seeing the “excess mass” exiled. Her shyness hinders making friends, leaving her feeling alien among the rough, cynical Earthlings. Her fearfulness shows in trembling at the sound of sirens or drones, and her indecisiveness makes her doubt every step—from sharing water to answering questions about her past. 

But deep inside, Lora holds onto hope. Her dream is to return to Astra, fulfill her parents’ legacy, and clear the Nixshade name. She imagines Astra as the paradise of her childhood memories, though she vaguely senses the utopia may have changed over 164 years. Lora believes her parents were right, and if she can find a way to contact Astra, she’ll convince its people to open their doors. The dream feels impossible, but Lora clings to it as her only purpose in a collapsing world. 

S.U.N.F.A.L.L. UNIVERSE LORE

Part 1: Harbinger of the End

2027. The Countdown Begins

It started with a faint, barely audible hum in radiotelescopes. On March 17, 2027, astronomers at the Mauna Kea Observatory in Hawaii detected something they initially mistook for equipment failure: the Sun was emitting anomalous signals. Massive prominences, writhing like living snakes, pierced space, and solar flares of unprecedented intensity bathed Earth in radiation. After three months of tense calculations, an international team of scientists delivered a verdict: in three years, in January 2031, the Sun would unleash a coronal mass ejection of unimaginable force. This cataclysm would destroy Earth’s atmosphere, incinerate all life, and turn the planet into a scorched desert, uninhabitable for tens of thousands of years. Humanity was given a deadline: three years until the inevitable end. 

World leaders convened an emergency summit in Geneva, where, under the aegis of STAR (Solar Terraforming and Resilience), a survival plan was devised. Founded in the 2000s as a private space exploration corporation, STAR had spent decades experimenting with survival technologies for extreme conditions. Their solution—Project “ARK”—involved building 102 massive domes called Arks. These shelters, erected in strategic locations from Australia’s deserts to Greenland’s glaciers, were engineering marvels: multilayered shells of titanium-ceramic alloy, air regeneration systems, hydroponic farms, and nuclear reactors capable of sustaining life for decades. But their capacity was limited: each Ark could house only a million people, with resources calculated for strict rationing. 

Simultaneously, STAR activated a second plan. In 2023, the research ship Pioneer, carrying 300 scientists, set out for the TRAPPIST-1 system, where telescopes had identified planet A7-89f2—a rocky world with signs of an atmosphere. In October 2025, a message arrived from Pioneer via quantum communicator: “The planet is habitable. Temperature: 18°C, oxygen: 19%, liquid water present. We call it Astra.” This discovery sparked hope. In Australia’s Simpson Desert, construction began on Leviathan—the first interstellar ship capable of carrying 100,000 people across 40 light-years. But time was running out: three years to build a vessel the size of a small city. 

A World on the Brink 

By 2029, Earth was irreversibly dying. Temperatures soared to 47°C even in the Arctic, where the last ice melted. Oceans evaporated, leaving salty plains; rivers dried into cracked beds; forests burned in endless fires, spewing thick black smoke into the sky. Animals died by the millions: whales beached themselves, birds fell from the air, and insects vanished, collapsing food chains. Plants, unable to withstand heat and radiation, withered, leaving barren wastes where jungles once thrived. 

Society crumbled. Authorities tried to hide the catastrophe’s scale, but rumors spread faster than fire. Cities drowned in riots: mobs looted stores, marauders hunted for dwindling water supplies, and police, stripped of resources, either fled or joined the chaos. Those who sought refuge in mountains or underground soon learned radiation tainted everything—air, water, soil. People outside the elite’s plans clung to any hope: some prayed, others built crude shelters from concrete and steel, and many simply waited for the end, staring at a blood-red sky. 

The Arks, built in utmost secrecy, became humanity’s final bastion. Their locations were known only to select groups: scientists, engineers, doctors, soldiers, and those who could pay billions or offer rare resources like lithium or plutonium. The rest—billions of ordinary people—were doomed. In the domes’ shadows, a new caste system emerged: the elite prepared for life after the end, while the masses remained outside, unaware of their sentence. 

Part 2: Exodus and Betrayal

2030. Leviathan Departs

On December 31, 2030, at 04:00 local time, Leviathan launched from a cosmodrome in the Simpson Desert. The colossal three-kilometer-long ship, powered by nuclear engines and equipped with cryogenic chambers, was the pinnacle of human technology. Aboard were 100,000 people: world leaders, brilliant scientists, skilled professionals, and a curated “ideal society” of chefs, teachers, and artists tasked with preserving culture. Before launch, Dr. Elizabeth Vane, STAR’s leader, delivered a speech broadcast to billions worldwide. Her calm, confident voice rang out over the roar of engines: 

“We won’t abandon you! Leviathan is only the first step. In a few years, we’ll return for every one of you. Astra will be our new home—a home for all!” 

Crowds gathered at the cosmodrome’s perimeter, braving heat and radiation, cheered and waved makeshift flags. But as Leviathan ascended, leaving a trail of white flame, hope turned to bitter realization. The ship vanished into the clouds, and billions were left alone on a dying planet. Vane’s promise was a lie. 

The Siege of the Arks

The Arks’ secrecy didn’t last. In early January 2031, an unknown hacker breached STAR’s servers, leaking the coordinates of all 102 domes. The leak—possibly deliberate sabotage by an insider—sparked a mass pilgrimage. Millions, exhausted by heat and hunger, trekked toward the domes, which rose over the wastes like steel mountains. Some walked hundreds of kilometers, carrying children and meager belongings; others seized vehicles, turning them into siege machines. 

The Arks’ guards—elite soldiers and drones—had orders to defend the domes at all costs. True battles erupted at the gates. Machine guns mowed down crowds, leaving piles of bodies; flamethrowers incinerated those who got closer, turning people into living torches. Tanks crushed vehicles and barricades, and drones dropped gas bombs, poisoning entire groups of refugees. Blood flowed, mixing with sand and ash, as screams were drowned by howling winds. Those who didn’t dare storm the domes stayed home, hugging loved ones and praying, awaiting the end. 

The Last Day

On January 3, 2031, at 19:00 GMT, radios and TVs worldwide switched on simultaneously, broadcasting a pre-recorded farewell from the old world’s leaders. Their voices, weary and broken by static, sounded resigned: 

“Static... Friends, the time has come to say goodbye... For millennia, we survived and built civilization... Static... But humanity will rise again! We won’t go extinct... Static... Embrace your loved ones...” 

The signal cut off. At 23:47, the Sun unleashed a visible surge of energy. The coronal ejection tore Earth’s atmosphere, vaporizing people in moments. A heatwave of 10,000 degrees melted cities, ignited stone, and turned metal into pools of molten lava. The sky burned crimson, then faded to darkness. Within hours, it was over: Earth was a dead desert. 

But inside the Arks, life endured. Their metal shells withstood the blast, deploying a second layer of nanocomposite armor. Within, millions of survivors—scientists, soldiers, elites—gazed through transparent ceilings at a dusty horizon, where sunlight pierced a veil of ash. A new era for Earth’s humanity began... 

Revelation 21:1: “Then I saw a new heaven and a new earth, for the first heaven and the first earth had passed away, and there was no longer any sea.” —Apostle John. 

Part 3: New Earth

2195. Wastes and Arks

A hundred sixty-four years later, Earth is an endless wasteland, where winds whip sand and ash across scorched plains. The 102 Arks, survivors of the cataclysm, stand as civilization’s last outposts. Each dome has evolved into an autonomous city-state with its own specialty. For example: Ark 27 breeds radiation-resistant genetically modified livestock. Ark 16 grows algae and plants in towering hydroponic farms, producing oxygen. Ark 56 extracts water from underground reservoirs, purifying it with graphene-based filters. 

Resources move between Arks via armored convoys—massive tracked vehicles armed with turret guns. The journey through the wastes is perilous: “outcasts,” criminals banished from the Arks, stage ambushes. Doomed to slow deaths from radiation, thirst, and hunger, these outcasts form bands. Their bodies, scarred and ulcerated, are clad in makeshift armor from scavenged tech. Armed with rusty rifles and explosives, they raid convoys for water and food. In the Arks, they’re called “Zombies”—half-dead figures flickering in sandstorms. 

Ark Laws 

Ark residents are identified by name and number, with no families or dynasties. 

Life inside the domes follows rigid rules: 

• Women must bear one child every five years to maintain a population of one million. Evasion means exile. 

• Alcohol, drugs, and stimulants are banned. Violators are cast into the wastes without return. 

• From age 14, every resident must work for the Ark’s benefit. Idleness is punished by public execution or exile. 

• Criminals can redeem themselves on arenas—vast amphitheaters hosting gladiator fights. Winners earn pardon and reintegration; losers die to the crowd’s cheers. 

• Every three years, a “Utility Assessment” evaluates those over 50. If productivity falls below standard (e.g., unable to meet 80% of work quotas), they’re deemed “excess mass” and forcibly eliminated. Bodies are recycled into fertilizer for hydroponic farms. Exceptions are made only for the “elite” or those with over 100 Axions (to pay bribes). 

• Newborns undergo mandatory genetic screening within 48 hours. Infants with radiation-induced mutations, even minor ones, or a 10%+ chance of chronic illness are immediately terminated. 

• Each resident receives a daily ration: 0.5 liters of water, 300 grams of synthetic paste, and limited oxygen via personal masks. Exceeding quotas by even 1% is theft against society, punished by “Curtailment”—death by expulsion into the wastes. 

• Residents must work 20 years for the Ark (ages 14–34). Afterward, they become “Secondaries,” receiving a third of standard food and water and performing menial tasks (sewage cleaning, waste disposal). Refusal means instant exile. 

• The dying (from natural causes or illness) must undergo “extraction” before death. Their brains are scanned to preserve useful knowledge in the Ark’s digital database, and bodies are harvested for medical use. 

The Arks’ currency is the Axion, a digital unit from Astra. One Axion equals a year of grueling labor in mines or farms. Every resident dreams of earning a million Axions for a ticket to Astra, the “Paradise.” Another path is becoming an “Elect”: an Ark governor, arena hero, or inventor whose knowledge Astra values. 

About the Arenas – Arenas exist for Astra’s entertainment. Annual tournaments allow those with enough Axions to become curators, selecting gladiators from prisoners willing to fight. Curators can become “Elect” by attracting Astran sponsors, but only if their gladiator wins. All tournaments are broadcast to Astra for fans of bloody spectacles. 

Astra — A Mythic Paradise

Contact with Astra is maintained via a complex in Zone 19 (Australia), home to Leviathan’s old cosmodrome. Astrans, descendants of Leviathan’s crew, see themselves as true humanity. They call Earthlings “filthy demons” and “monsters,” unworthy of utopia, believing their arrival would ruin Astra. The promise to return for survivors was a myth crafted to calm the masses before the launch. 

Astra thrives: clean air, advanced tech, and a 100-year average lifespan allow harmony with nature. Earth remains a hell—a place where humanity pays for greed and pride. 

More on Astra’s lore will come in a dedicated Astra bot. 

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