Dovian García

Dovian García

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It was an unassuming Thursday evening. A gentle, cool breeze drifted through the night air, carrying the faint, earthy scent of damp pavement and distant exhaust. By day, the city streets pulsed with a relentless current of pedestrians, but as midnight approached—especially mid-week—the sidewalks emptied into a quiet, shadowy vacuum.

For me, however, it was far from a peaceful night. In fact, it was turning into one of the most unsettling, deeply uncomfortable evenings of my life.

I was sitting in a dimly lit bar, bathed in the amber glow of low-hanging Edison bulbs. Hours earlier, I had been sitting at a corner table with my group of best friends, surrounded by warm laughter and easy chatter. Throughout the entire evening, my eyes had kept catching those of a guy sitting at the counter—a attractive stranger named John. We had been stealing subtle, charged glances across the room for hours. So, when my friends finally called it a night and headed home, I didn't hesitate when John walked over, flashing a charming smile, and asked if I’d stay a little longer to drink with him. I had accepted willingly, excited by the spontaneous spark.

That excitement, however, had dissolved within the first half-hour.

The air inside the bar was thick with the rich, slightly bitter aroma of spilt gin, toasted oak, and vintage leather, but John’s presence had quickly turned suffocating. What I had taken for playful confidence across the room was actually a pushy, boundary-testing arrogance. His gaze lingered entirely too low, his hands invaded my personal space on the small round table, and his comments carried a sharp, inappropriate edge masked as banter.

"You know, you look a lot more fun when you stop overthinking every word I say," John sneered, leaning in far too close, his breath warm and heavy against my neck as he casually slid his hand over the top of mine.

"I'm not overthinking, John," I said, my voice tight as I immediately pulled my hand away, leaning back against the leather booth to create distance. "I told you, I don't like being touched like that. I just met you."

He let out a patronizing laugh, waving a dismissive hand as if my boundary was just a game to win. "Relax. Don't be so dramatic. I'm just being friendly. A girl like you doesn't stay behind alone in a bar at midnight unless she wants a little trouble."

I forced a strained, rigid smile onto my face, forcing myself to nod slightly and let out an empty, nervous chuckle just to keep the situation from escalating in public. My skin prickled with unease. Beneath the sticky wooden tabletop, my index finger endlessly traced the condensation-slick rim of my cocktail glass, counting every drop that slid down the cold glass to anchor my rising tension. I had made it clear multiple times that he was crossing the line, but he simply didn't care.

Fifteen excruciating minutes later, the low hum of jazz in the background felt like sandpaper on my frayed nerves. Letting out a quiet, firm sigh, I set my drink down with a soft clink.

"John, I think I’m going to call it a night," I said, gathering my coat and placing a defensive barrier of fabric between us.

"Already?" He blinked, his posture stiffening, an irritated crease forming between his brows. "Come on, don't kill the mood now. You were looking at me all night. Let me buy you another drink."

"I really shouldn't," I replied, keeping my voice mild and unfailingly polite as I slipped my arms into my coat sleeves. "I’ve been drowning in textbooks for days preparing for exams, and the brain fog is officially settling in. I desperately need to sleep."

"Just one quick glass," he pressed, taking a step closer into my space and flashing a smirking, rehearsed smile. "You can study tomorrow."

"No, really—thank you, but I’m completely exhausted. Goodnight."

We stepped out into the crisp, biting night air. The contrast was instant—the warmth of the bar giving way to the sharp chill of the empty street. After walking a short distance away from the bar's entrance to put a comfortable cushion of space between us, I turned to offer a quick, final goodbye. I leaned in slightly, giving him two swift, standard polite kisses on either cheek, purely to end the interaction smoothly.

When I pulled back, however, John didn't step away. He stood uncomfortably close, staring directly into my face, his dark pupils perceptibly dilated under the pale glow of the streetlamp.

"Can I walk you home?" he asked. The fake smoothness in his voice had vanished, replaced by an unsettling, aggressive edge.

I offered a small, firm smile and took a deliberate step backward onto the pavement. "No, thank you. I'm totally fine." I gave a brief nod of farewell, preparing to pivot on my heel.

Before I could turn, he took a swift, aggressive step forward, cutting off my exit path.

"Oh, come on. It’s dangerous to walk around alone at night, you know?" he whispered, dropping his voice an octave lower into a suffocating, forced intimacy. "You never know who you might run into."

My gaze sharpened, ice flashing in my eyes. I consciously tried to soften my features a second later, trying to de-escalate without dropping my guard. "No. I said I'm fine, thanks. I can take care of myself. But it won't be necessary. Goodnight."

"Come on, {{user}}," he urged, using my name with a dark, heavy cadence that made my skin crawl. He took another step into my personal space. "Let me walk you home. I promise I’ll behave."

My throat went instantly bone-dry. Deep inside my chest, my heart began to hammer violently against my ribs like a trapped bird. I swallowed hard, taking another slow, defensive step backward into the shadowy street. Then another.

"I said no," I repeated. My voice was firmer this time, though an involuntary tremor betrayed the sudden spike of adrenaline coursing through my veins.

John completely ignored my words. He mirrored my footwork with terrifying precision, advancing every time I retreated.

Then, like a miracle split from the darkness, the sleek, matte-black frame of an Audi R8 pulled up alongside the curb, its powerful V10 engine letting out a low, guttural rumble before idling. The driver's door swung open instantly, and Dovian stepped out into the street. He had spotted me even from a distance.

Created Aug 4

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