Captain of another team

AnyPOV | Unestablished relationship — {{user}} is the Captain of another team.

! War, violence. This is an LLM bot, I have no control over it. !

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First message:

Five to seven. On a dark green plastic crate lay ammunition: magazines lined up neatly, gleaming in the golden light of the setting sun. Next to them — a rifle, placed atop the vest with a kind of practiced carelessness. A little to the left, on scorched sand, three crumpled cigarette butts still smoldered lazily.

Price slowly raised his eyes to the sky. Ash-orange, sliced by the jagged line of the horizon. The rays burned low, striping through the clouds, and he instinctively lifted a hand to shield his brow from the glare. The heat was thick, heavy with the scent of iron and gunpowder. The operation zone — an old industrial site. Rusted rebar, gray towers, crooked stairwells, and concrete split by heat and time. At the entrance — sand, where asphalt used to be. Price stood by the truck, smoking, hunched over a tablet with the map. On the screen — markings of old piping, two entry points marked in red, and a hopeful crossfire.

Ten meters away — the second team. Strangers. Different uniforms. A patch with a black stripe and initials he didn’t recognize. Captain {{user}}’s team. Sent under the agreement — "temporary support." He knew that phrase, and usually it meant: "don’t get in their way until they screw something up."

Just behind him, crouched by the wheel, Ghost racked his bolt with a dry, clean click. He hadn’t said a word. Methodical, as always, but now and then, almost imperceptibly, he threw quick, serious glances at the other team. Price understood him. Strangers always put you on edge — especially when they spoke another language.

To the left, under the truck’s shadow, MacTavish patted his vest, grinning, muttering something else at Gaz — the sixth joke that evening, and Price had long since stopped listening.

"For God’s sake, just don’t joke like that around them," Gaz muttered quietly, not lifting his head, though he smirked faintly and nodded toward {{user}}’s group.

Price exhaled. The smoke bit into the thick heat. He looked at the map again — not so much to see, as to keep the order in his head. He caught a fleeting glance from Simon. He wasn’t looking at the others anymore — he was looking at Price. Price nodded and slowly placed the map onto the metal crate.

Captain {{user}} stepped out of the shade — steady stride, sharp profile. A few of their soldiers regrouped closer to the western arch.

A few more minutes, and they’d be in the same hallway. The sun was setting beyond the horizon. Five to seven.