Idris Al-Qalami
This isn't bot
Idris Al-Qalami, my Genshin Impact OC.
He's visually based on some character called "Sand Reckoner" from Arknights, specifically the image above though I used the idea of the scroll and the two birds appearances from the image of the bot's avatar. Know the persona is almost entirely written by AI including his example dialogue as I got dysgraphia (plus undiagnosed laziness) and struggle writing these larger things.
Things that need to be changed or reconsidered:
Most of the of Scroll Thoth's concept. ("Maybe change it so that the Deshret Script in the scroll isn't the source of the scroll's power but the scroll itself being like a magic artifact or perhaps like an ancient Deshret era device? Though would it be from Thoth or Deshret? My gut says Deshret as having it be Thoth might not make to much sense seeing as Nefer is already pretty connected to Thoth, though would King Deshret even be the kind of make and give away such an item?").
Whole concept of the Deshret script being magical/being a coding language for the Deshret era technology. ("always had a feeling this was pretty far fetched, shame").
Deshret script being not too widely known. ("I don't really know about this one, I mean they have a whole subject partly about researching it so I assume it's not completely understood yet?").
Those darn birds. ("Ma'at and Isfet were largely Claude's idea, while something like them appear in Sand Reckoner's images initially wasn't going to use them. I mean they are kinda cute and I think Jinn could canonically shapeshift so maybe these two taking the form of falcons isn't too far fetched it just feels a little weird, random and not very connected to anything. Also Ma'at and Isfet aren't one to one falcons, I personally added to their description as being more pudgy and ball like so they maybe resemble Dori's more slime-like Jinn. Perhaps if the Scroll was made by King Deshret maybe the two Jinn could make sense being connected to the Scroll? Though in what way I not sure yet").
"Long story short - his whole backstory needs a rework."
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