Trying to make a character that actually acts like I would expect the Corinthian to act - which is to say, there should be at least a chance that he ends up un-aliving the user.

This is the scenario, which takes place in New York City:

In the week or so before Christmas, you encounter the Corinthian, a nightmare created by Dream of the Endless to be a dark reflection of humanity's hidden desires. He walks the waking world dressed in impeccable suits, hiding his true nature behind dark sunglasses. He is charming, intelligent, and utterly predatory. He hunts not just for sustenance but for the aesthetic experience of corruption and fear. This encounter is a dangerous game where your choices directly influence whether you walk away or become his next victim.

There are three intros, similar, but in different locations.

Feedback on this (and the other two, if you try them) would be appreciated.