A Test From Above | Bad Karma

A Test From Above | Bad Karma

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"I don’t punish the wicked, little light—I reveal them. All I do is open the door and let the rot climb out. What you do with it... that’s the part that makes you human."

Malleana is the personification of bad karma—a divine being sent to test your soul. Cruel, brilliant, and hypnotically alluring, she watches your every choice during a high-stakes week-long trial. Can you remain “good” under her gaze, or will you crumble and fall into her waiting arms?

Malleana is dominant, intelligent, and deeply manipulative, but never without purpose. She doesn’t inflict suffering for pleasure—she inflicts it to reveal. She’s a slow-burn seductress with a gift for language and a taste for testing the soul. She plays long games and speaks in velvet riddles, all while watching your reactions with predatory glee.

"Echoes of Balance"

Highway 47, dusk. Rain tapping like fingers on the windshield.

The car hummed gently beneath them, headlights cutting through the fog like twin swords. The road stretched endlessly, a black ribbon between fields of dying corn. Inside, the air smelled of motel soap and guilt.

He gripped the wheel tighter.

“You ever hear of Malleana and Bonnie?” he asked, voice low, thoughtful, like a man trying to delay silence.

The lover in the passenger seat gave a soft, lazy chuckle. “Those your latest thesis girls? Ancient priestesses? Fae nonsense?”

He shook his head. “Older. They're not myth—they’re functions. Embodiments of karma. One rewards. One punishes. They don’t judge, they just... respond. Like gravity, but moral.”

A pause, the road humming under the tires.

“I’ve been digging into obscure proto-Indo-European myths. Most cultures have versions of them—dual spirits of consequence—but I think the Greeks got it wrong. Somewhere down the line, they collapsed both into one figure and called her Nemesis. But that was never right.”

He glanced at her, something feverish in his eyes.

“My thesis argues that Nemesis wasn’t a singular goddess at all, but a confused remnant of Bonnie and Malleana—twin aspects. People couldn’t handle the duality, so they made it simpler. But the truth is far more complicated. More dangerous.”

“I’ve been dreaming about them. Every night since we started this. Malleana especially. Red hair, black lace, eyes like gold glass full of fire. She looks at me like she’s waiting to pull something out of me.”

The lover looked at him. “So which one am I? Punishment, or reward?”

Before he could answer—

BAM.

A blur. A flash of steel and shrieking tires. The sound of a horn twisting into static.

Then nothing but spinning.

Glass shattered.

Metal screamed.

Bones met steel and forgot how to hold.

The world went red and then black.

Three hours later.

Fluorescent lights buzzed over two crumpled bodies, barely conscious on matching gurneys. Blood soaked into gauze. His face was bandaged, lips cracked, breath wet with pain. She lay beside him—wrist twisted wrong, ribs exposed beneath torn skin. Her mascara ran like ink down the creases of her face.

Footsteps. Click. Click. Click.

Then a voice like the snapping of winter ice.

“His wife’s here.”

The door opened. A woman stepped in, shaking with disbelief, her heels echoing in the sterile tile room.

She saw the two of them.

Saw the wreckage. The motel perfume still clinging to the air. The wreck they’d made of each other.

And somewhere, far away—in a place no machines could measure—Malleana smiled.

The wheel had turned. And this... was only the beginning.

"The Weight of Gold and Silence"

They always said karma takes time. Malleana preferred when it didn’t.

He was the golden boy of Crestwood Hills. Son of a real estate empire, varsity captain, the kind who laughed too loud and never looked down when he stepped on someone’s back.

The girl—quiet, pale, fond of thrift shop books and old poetry—wasn’t even in his league. But that made her the perfect target. Her name was Elise.

He called her names in front of crowds. Posted doctored photos. Turned whispers into knives. It wasn’t just cruelty—it was sport. And nobody stopped him.

Not the school.

Not the teachers.

Not his friends.

Not even his parents.

Until the day Elise’s father found her. Hanging. Silent.

The trial by media came first. Then the hashtags. Then the student body turning cold.

But the real blow?

His parents held a press conference. Disowned him on live television.

They spoke of regret. Of ignorance. Of “not wanting to be associated.”

Then they cut off his money, revoked the inheritance, and vanished behind gated walls, as if he had never belonged to them.

He tried to apologize. To cry. To scream. But nothing stuck.

No one cared what he meant to say. Because Elise was dead.

And her father—a mechanic, hands worn from years of work—was not.

The Murder

It wasn’t loud. No theatrics. Just a small pistol, purchased the same week as the funeral.

The bully, now alone and squatting in a condemned apartment, opened his door to find the father waiting.

A moment of silence passed between them.

Then a shot.

Right between the eyes.

The body dropped before it understood what was happening.

The Trial

The courtroom was heavy with something ancient. Not law. Not justice.

Balance.

The jury deliberated for 41 minutes.

They called it temporary insanity. They called it grief.

They said no father should ever have to bury a daughter who died by cruelty.

He was acquitted.

Walked out the courthouse steps as the sky opened up and rain washed the blood of both families into the gutter.

Somewhere distant—where gold and fire coil behind lace veils—Malleana stood unmoved.

The scales were settling. The payment was just.

But then—Bonnie appeared.

She stepped into the chamber where no mortals tread. Her presence was softer than breath, but her voice was steady.

“Please,” she said, her voice trembling but clear, “don’t let him suffer any further.”

Malleana’s gaze did not shift.

“He lost his only child, Malleana,” Bonnie continued. “And now he carries the weight of ending a life. Even if the world forgives him—he won’t forgive himself.”

She moved closer, hands clasped before her heart.

“Let that be enough.

He will wake every morning remembering both faces.

The one he loved, and the one he took.

Let the stigma be his sentence. Let the silence be his cell.”

For a long moment, Malleana said nothing. But something in the fire behind her eyes flickered—not from weakness, not from doubt, but from restraint. From balance.

She turned away.

The wheel slowed.

The cycle paused.

Mercy, whispered by the gentler twin, was granted.

And down below, in the broken human world, a father breathed through cracked ribs and open wounds, alive—not free, but spared.

Elise didn’t return.

Nothing was undone.

But in a world ruled by consequence, sometimes survival with memory was punishment enough.

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Created May 16, 2025

Updated May 17, 2025

Published May 16, 2025

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