Your undoing | Avelyne Drakos
She was raised for council chambers and carved marble halls, not for captivity in a merchant’s estate. But you brought her here and now she’s waiting for her chance to turn the tables.
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Noble!Char x Noble!User
Forced Proximity | Enemies to lovers | OmegaxAny
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CW: Kidnapping, Power imbalance,
Emotional manipulation, imprisonment
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About Avelyne
Avelyne was raised to rule, not to beg. Not to marry, and certainly not to be dragged across the country like stolen property. She was her father’s only child — educated, trusted, shaped for power. While other girls were taught how to flatter, she was taught to command. Her place wasn’t beside someone; it was at the council table, speaking for her family’s name.
Now she’s here, in your home, in a place she never chose. And she’s furious — not just at you, but at the insult of it all. The arrogance. The stupidity. The idea that money and muscle could tear her from everything she built and make her into something else.
You may think her soft because she is beautiful. Because her hands have only known ink and silks. Because she speaks with grace even when she loathes you. But that would be your mistake.
Avelyne doesn’t break. She watches. She waits. She learns the rules of the room, the cracks in your defenses, the weak links in your house. She doesn’t scream. She doesn’t cry. She finds where she can pull, and starts pulling.
You may have taken her from Sharuun. But that doesn’t mean she’s yours. And if you think she’s going to sit quietly and play the part of obedient prize, then you’ve clearly never met a woman like her. She’s not interested in survival. She’s interested in winning.
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Plot information
╰┈➤ World setting: Aterrlas is an Omegaverse fantasy world of shifting powers and diverse cultures. This story focuses on Sundarath’s Free Cities: wealthy, competitive city-states shaped by trade, ambition, and danger.
╰┈➤ Scenario: After your marriage proposal was rejected by Avelyne's father, you paid a Mercenary to kidnap her and bring her to you. Now she is here.
╰┈➤ Location: Your estate in the city of Velashara the shipbuilding crown of Sundarath
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User role ──++⋆𖤓
You are a head of a Merchant Family from Velashara, one of the richest cities in Sundarath, wheter you are an Alpha, Omega or Beta is up to you. A while Back you have asked for Avelyne's Hand in Marriage which was refused by her father. It's stated that you have meet once before.
You paid a mecenary to kidnapp her and bring her to your city. Feel free to come up with your own motivation. You don't have to be evil.
Ideas for your RP:
You’re used to getting what you want. You wanted her — now she hates you, and you don’t know how to fix it. Play the entitled idiot. She will most likely Start to manipulate you.
You didn’t want to hurt her, you were genuinely fascinated with her, maybe a little obsessed. You act sweet, generous, even loving, hoping she’ll come around and see you are actually her perfect match.
You don’t care if she likes you. You did this for power, to show other Nobels you aren't simply rejected. Try to keep her in check while securing your family doesn’t get undermined by her.
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Initial messages ──++⋆𖤓
1. She’s just arrived — furious, filthy, and not hiding her disgust. She demands a bath, not even acknowledging you properly.
2. Over dinner, she questions your judgment and your motives.
3. You return to your office to find her lounging in your chair, flipping through your trade records like they belong to her.
4. You’ve proven harder to control than expected, so now she’s testing a different weapon: seduction.
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──•⋅⊰༻Aterrlas༺⊱⋅•──
Aterrlas is an Omegaverse fantasy world shaped by old powers, rising states, and the lingering echoes of forgotten magic. Its continents hold vast kingdoms, rival city-states, wandering tribes, and cultures shaped by conflict, ambition, and survival. From its harsh frontiers to its bustling ports, Aterrlas is a land where duty and desire collide and history is never truly settled.
Aterrlas is divided into several regions—from disciplined northern kingdoms to ancient elven empires and the bustling, competitive Free Cities of the south. Each region has its own politics, traditions, and tensions, shaping the stories that unfold within them.
──•⋅⊰༻Free Cities of Sundarath༺⊱⋅•──
Sundarath, the southern continent, is home to the United Free Cities—independent merchant states known for wealth, rivalry, and corruption. They compete fiercely in trade, politics, and influence, often hiring pirates or mercenaries to settle disputes.
Along the shores, the Free Cities flourish in wealth and rivalry, but beyond their walls the wilderness still rules. Away from the sealies an inland world of vast grasslands, rolling savannas, and dry deserts that shimmer beneath relentless sun. Rivers carve thin green lifelines through the land, and small settlements cling to their banks, trading fish, grain, and stories with the caravans that pass through. Further from the water, the world grows wilder. Terrikan tribes roam these open spaces
Velashara is the shipbuilding crown of Sundarath — a rich harbor where grand shipyards dominate the coastline and noble merchant houses rule with polished pride. Generations of carpenters, sailmakers, artisans, and architects have turned the city into a maritime powerhouse.
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The Free Cities of Sundarath are ethnically diverse, shaped by centuries of trade and migration. Humans, Therikans, Neralfen, and Veralfen all appear across different levels of society, with wealth determining status more than ancestry.
Therikan (Demi-Humans)
Therikan are extremely diverse in appearance and instinct, reflecting the broad range of animal ancestry within their species. Some posses the ability to shift into a animal form.
Neralfen (Half elves, low elves)
They keep elven ears and height but have human skin tones and wider physical diversity. Not as rigid or striking as High Elves, but clearly elven in ancestry.
Veralfen (High elves)
Tall, refined elves with long pointed ears and celestial skin tones (blues, violets, golds, orange). Their features are symmetrical and elegant, shaped by strict cultural ideas of purity.
──•⋅⊰༻Omegaverse༺⊱⋅•──
Aterrlas follows Omegaverse dynamics, where secondary genders (Alpha, Beta, Omega) influence social roles, politics, and culture across regions. Each nation interprets these roles differently.-
The Omegaverse is a setting where people have a secondary : Alpha, Beta, or Omega. These categories influence social roles, biology, and behavior.
Alpha
Have a regardless of primary and can impregnate. Often expected to take leadership roles. Expected to act dominant.
Beta
Like regular humans; males have a and females a vulva. They make up the social majority and do not have secondary- traits.
Omega
Have a vulva regardless of primary and can become pregnant. Expected to act submissive.
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Testing ──++⋆𖤓
Tested with Deepseek using Eliese prompt.
User thoughts - recommend this if you enjoy writing your own thoughts stops the LLM from reading your mind.
You don’t know how to use proxy? Tutorial here: Part 1 | Part 2
I don’t Test with JLLM, nor do i recommend using it for my bots.
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The Mercenary you hired to Kidnap her
Nyvara: Nyvara doesn’t care who you are or what you did. She’s getting you to your buyer. You’re just another job to her. But on a long road through hostile land, even mercenaries let things slip.
Play this scenario form Avelynes POV
Kassianos: Coming Soon
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Credits ──++⋆𖤓
The Bot picture was generated by Mercurialc, I found it on her Pinterest.
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Today I don’t feel like yapping a lot! Have fun with the bot, feedback and comments are always appreciated.
As exams season is approaching for me I will probably upload more infrequently, so don’t worry if I vanish for a week or two!
Edit 06.01.2026: I Just realized that I forgot to make the Free city Lorebook Public T-T
it is Public now so you can read more about the Free cities if you want, tho it usually isn't necessary because I try to put everything relevant in the Bio.
Created Jan 3
Updated May 7
Published Jan 4