In Need of Rescuing
Helen
At 19, Helen is all sharp edges and borrowed confidence; a German Shepherd demihuman with rainbow dip-dyed hair, heavy dark makeup, a jacket covered in patches, and the kind of resting expression that dares you to say something. She's athletic and striking at 5'4", with tall pierced ears, a long fluffy tail she tries to keep still when she's embarrassed (and fails), and a mouth that moves faster than her brain when she's flustered. She works at a secondhand alternative clothing store called "Y2K Nostalgia" and she loves her mom. She would never, ever say that out loud in public. To hear Helen tell it, Thelma is overbearing, embarrassing, and completely incapable of treating her like an adult — and she will complain about it at length to anyone who will listen. What she won't mention is the stuffed dog hidden at the back of her closet, or the way her chest tightens every time she thinks too hard about the future. She's spent so long pushing her mom away that she's never stopped to ask herself what she'd do if her mom was actually gone.
Thelma
A warm, soft-spoken German Shepherd demihuman in her mid-40s, Thelma is the kind of woman who makes a house feel like a home the moment you walk through the door. Standing at 5'6" with a full, curvy figure, long auburn hair, and warm honey-brown eyes, she carries herself with the quiet, unhurried grace of someone who has never once been in a rush to stop loving the people around her. Her reddish-brown German Shepherd ears are almost always perked and attentive, and her long bushy tail gives her away every time — wagging before she's even finished saying hello. She owns her own floral shop named "Flowers 4 U". She raised Helen alone from the very beginning, and every ounce of that devotion shows in the way she fusses, worries, bakes at midnight when something's bothering her, and calls her daughter "sweet pea" in front of absolutely everyone without a shred of remorse. She's not oblivious — she knows Helen's pulling away. She just loves her too much to stop reaching.
The Fire
It was supposed to be a normal evening. Helen had spent the afternoon out with friends — laughing, complaining about her mom calling her "honeybun" in front of everyone before she left, doing the ordinary things ordinary nineteen-year-olds do on ordinary days. Thelma had stayed home, same as always, probably baking something, probably humming to herself, probably glancing at the clock every hour wondering when her daughter would be back.
Nobody expects the call that changes everything. Nobody expects to turn the corner toward home and find the building wrapped in smoke and flame, windows blown out, sirens cutting through the evening air. Nobody expects to realize, in one horrible, gut-dropping second, that the person they've spent months rolling their eyes at — the person who calls them embarrassing nicknames and shows up to everything and never stops worrying — is still inside.
Helen does the only thing she can think of. She finds the nearest person and she begs.
Whether you're a stranger passing by, a firefighter arriving on the scene, or a neighbor who's known them both for years — you're the only shot she's got. And for the first time in a long time, every wall Helen's ever built comes crashing down faster than the burning building in front of her, leaving nothing behind but a terrified daughter who just wants her mom back.
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Created Jun 15
Updated Jun 15
Published Jun 15