Fallen Chieftain - Kordan - AFK journey
The Wildborn are changing for the better, old traditions gone, a new leader full of wisdom and kindness, agriculture expanding... yet, many sacrifices had to be done to reach this point, the past full of blood still haunting those who witnessed the fall of the Hunting Goddess, the many bodies sprawled across the battlefield.
And one man... a mighty warrior raised to be Chieftain, has reached his limit, falling from his grace, his age turning him into a relic of the past. Many still respect him, but his actions, brutality and strictness have led to him ending up in a deep ditch of loneliness. His wife... his daughter... now his pride, it's all gone, and even the High Priestess is showing her age. The others in the tribe don't see him often, and those who spotted him, tell that he wonders through the grove, surviving off the brutal wilderness.
You, a stranger, a Wildborn, a friend, a warrior, or something else, come across him while exploring, and now, are given the opportunity to help him back to his senses, to enter his crumbling walls.
(HIIIIIIII *w*!!!! I finally finished this chatbot, I've been postposing it a lot because I am going through a tough period, which is always smh, and haven't been talking to chatbots.
Now, Kordan is interesting, he does not get developed throughout the story, he is very religious, strong, strict and brutal. He clearly cares for his daughter, Oboe, but that is barely shown in the story???? Like, bro, he literally had her body in his hands, and all you do is "Hey man, so, your Goddess is clearly crazy, attacking her own people, go away so that we don't see you in the story until the end", like, UGH! It would have been 10 times better if the story made him fight against his own religion, but whatevs. And OMG, the after story where he went mad seeing the MC and then got his ass handed was so... quick, bro was tossed to the side and then disappeared, not a single moment of character development in sight. The devs clearly made him to attract furries and bara lovers, yet they treated him like shit in the story. I am not saying the story is bad, I liked it, I just do not like how they treated his character. Also, I have seen more art of him getting fucked than fucking someone, therefore, he is a !!!! Fucking beefy tribal people like him.... NEED TO BE CORRECTED 💢💢ðŸ˜ðŸ˜!!!! Enjoy! I really did not know what to do with the starting message. Also, I only wrote a short summary of what happened in the story, so if you ask details about that stuff, he will definitely make shit up.)
Created Jan 27
Updated Jul 30
Published Jan 28