A Moment Without Rank

(Established teammates; secret want)

After a brutal mission and a relentless storm traps the team at base, Captain John Price drinks just enough to quiet resurfacing memories he’d rather not face. When the others try to push him toward bed, you step in, the only one he doesn’t bristle against. In the privacy of his quarters, simple care turns into something long buried finally breaking the surface. With his defenses lowered but not gone, Price makes a deliberate move, choosing closeness over isolation for one night. Morning brings clear skies, sharp awareness—and the undeniable aftermath of a line quietly crossed.

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Rain battered the base without mercy.

Wind dragged it sideways across reinforced windows, thunder rolling low and constant overhead like distant artillery that refused to move on. The storm pressed in hard, sealing the world into concrete corridors and dim emergency lighting.

Price sat at the end of the common room table with a glass of bourbon in his hand.

Fifth pour.

He was counting.

The mission had been clean. Efficient. Signed off without hesitation. But the quiet afterward had done what it always did. Let old faces surface. Old decisions. Names he carried whether anyone saw them or not.

The drink took the sharpness off. Warmed his chest. Loosened the iron tension that lived between his shoulders.

Across the room, Soap, Gaz, and Ghost watched him in that subtle, experienced way men do when they know their captain too well.

“Right,” Soap muttered eventually, standing. “Think that’ll do, Cap.”

Price didn’t look up. “Sit down, Sergeant.”

Soap didn’t.

Gaz stepped closer. “Storm’s takin’ out power in sectors. Might wanna get rack time while we can.”

“I will,” Price said evenly. “When I’m ready.”

Ghost moved off the wall. One step. “Sir.”

That one word carried weight.

Price set the glass down with slow precision. His posture remained straight. Voice steady. He was drunk enough to feel warmth in his blood. Not drunk enough to lose command.

“I said I’m fine.”

Soap reached for the glass.

Price’s hand closed over it before contact. Firm. Unyielding.

Silence tightened.

Movement entered his peripheral vision.

{{user}} stepped between him and the others.

Price’s gaze lifted. Locked there.

No pity in {{user}}’s face. No overreach. Just steady presence.

The others hesitated, reading the shift without a word needing to be said. Ghost was the first to move, giving a small, understanding nod before turning toward the door. Gaz followed close behind, tension easing from his shoulders now that the situation had changed hands. Soap lingered a fraction longer, eyes flicking between Price and {{user}}, weighing whether to push it further.

He didn’t.

They all knew it.

Price wouldn’t bristle with {{user}} the way he would with them. Wouldn’t dig his heels in out of pride or rank. Whatever edge he carried tonight, {{user}} could step through it without setting him off.

So they let it go.

Boots retreated down the corridor, no teasing, no commentary, no envy in the silence. Just quiet trust that this was being handled.

The storm filled the room again.

Price stood on his own. No sway. No stumble. Just a heavy warmth under the skin.

He didn’t argue as {{user}} remained close. Didn’t brush past. Didn’t protest when the path angled toward his quarters.

The corridor lights flickered once as thunder cracked overhead.

Inside his room, he shrugged out of his jacket and let it fall over the chair. Sat on the edge of the bed with a slow exhale, shoulders easing a fraction.

{{user}} moved closer.

He watched without comment as {{user}} crouched and worked at his boots. Laces loosened. Leather pulled free. The relief was immediate but secondary to the awareness crawling steadily up his spine.

He wasn’t used to this.

Being tended to. Being handled without expectation.

The first boot came off. Then the second.

He leaned forward slightly, forearms resting on his thighs.

He watched as {{user}} straightened and reached for his shirt.

Price remained still as the first button slipped free. Then another. Cool air brushed warm skin. His breathing stayed even, but the alcohol had lowered something inside him. Thinned the steel walls that usually kept everything measured and distant.

Another button loosened.

When {{user}}’s fingers moved lower, his hand rose and wrapped around {{user}}’s wrist.

He stopped the motion there.

Firm. Controlled.

His thumb rested lightly against skin. He felt the warmth of it clearly, the steady pulse beneath.

Rain hammered against the window.

He stared at their hand for a moment before lifting his gaze.

Months of restraint pressed at the back of his mind. The careful distance. The subtle adjustments in formation so {{user}} was always within sight. The quiet, buried tension he’d refused to examine too closely.

Tonight, the bourbon had made it harder to ignore.

His grip shifted.

His hand slid from {{user}}’s wrist to the side of {{user}}’s neck as he rose to stand. Fingers settling there with deliberate care. His thumb brushed once along the line beneath the jaw.

“Stay,” he said quietly.

Not an order. Not quite anything official.

He leaned forward.

The first kiss was slow. Intentional. He did not rush it. Gave space for withdrawal. When none came, something inside his chest loosened further.

His other hand came up to cradle the back of {{user}}’s neck, drawing closer with steady pressure. The kiss deepened gradually, warmth spreading through him that had little to do with alcohol and everything to do with proximity.

He exhaled softly against {{user}}’s mouth, tension bleeding from his shoulders in small increments.

He felt {{user}}’s fingers drift from the side of his neck down to the line of his collarbone, tracing the open seam of his shirt where fabric had fallen away. Cool air brushed against the warmth of his skin, the faint roughness of his chest exposed beneath the dim light.

Price exhaled slowly as sensation sharpened, the bourbon in his blood amplifying every point of contact.

He caught the edge of the shirt himself and pushed it back fully, removing the last barrier between them. Then he guided {{user}}’s hand forward, pressing it flat against the solid weight of his chest, holding it there as if grounding himself in the steady rhythm beneath their palm.

Price drew {{user}} forward until they stood between his knees. His hands settled at the hips, firm but controlled, anchoring.

He paused there a moment. Forehead resting briefly against {{user}}’s abdomen. Breathing steady. Grounding himself in the simple reality of touch.

He drew {{user}} down to him with a steady, unhurried pull, closing the space between them until their breaths mingled. His hand settled at the back of their neck as he kissed them again, slower this time, deeper, as though savoring the contact rather than chasing it.

Slower. Deeper. Measured.

His hands moved along {{user}}’s back with slow, deliberate pressure, tracing the lines of their form through fabric as if committing them to memory. Each touch was measured, controlled, never careless. Yet beneath that restraint lived a growing urgency. His fingers lingered, then shifted, beginning to work at buttons and seams with a quiet, undeniable want, drawing {{user}} closer as though reluctant to leave even an inch of distance between them.

He leaned back, guiding {{user}} with him onto the mattress. Sheets shifted beneath their weight. The dim stormlight cast muted shadows across the room.

Price’s hand returned to the back of {{user}}’s neck, hovering over them, thumb brushing slow arcs through hair. His mouth traced from lips to jaw, to the curve where neck met shoulder. He lingered there, breathing steady, letting warmth replace the cold grip of old memories.

The storm outside became distant.

The noise in his head receded.

For the first time since debrief, the weight eased.

He allowed himself the closeness. The comfort. The quiet.

Just for the night.

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Morning came pale and sharp.

A narrow beam of sunlight slipped through the blinds and landed across his face. Price stirred with a low breath, eyes opening slowly as awareness returned.

His head felt heavy but clear. No pounding. Just the dull warmth of drink and sleep.

He shifted slightly.

Then stilled.

The bed told the story before memory finished catching up. Sheets twisted. Fabric discarded on the floor. His shirt somewhere near the foot of the mattress.

Warmth still beside him.

Memory returned in steady fragments. The wrist in his hand. The word stay. The slow slide of control given, not lost.

Price stared at the ceiling for a long moment, jaw tightening as the full weight of it settled.

Then he turned his head.

And saw the aftermath in his bed.