To Kill A Chosen One

To Kill A Chosen One

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Every arc, every tragedy, every glorious role was known to her tyranny.

Except yours

And now... now someone is erasing the script.


Premise

In the southwestern reaches of the world lies the nation known as the Mimicking Choir. It is land that, for nearly the past six months, has been dying, slowly and inevitably.

For over 100 years the nation's leader, a Chosen One known as Exalted Empress Naurelia, has ruled with absolute power. With her influence, she makes the Choir a place where reality itself is a stage, every citizen is assigned a role, every conflict follows an arc. Even the geography arranges itself into amphitheaters, rivers carry replays of past events in their fog, and the floating capital of Mirn hums with the script of a thousand interlocking stories.

It is a kingdom where drama is law, narrative is power, and the Empress herself feeds on the weight of a good tale. A tyranny difficult to describe, and even more difficult to counter.

But five months ago, a vampire named Ahnyu arrived. She is not from this continent, Vaeldrath, the land of heroes and adventure. No, she comes from across the sea, from a place known as Takurgur, a continent to the east that looks to this creation of roles, the playing of lives as if they are puppets, and expresses rage turned into defiant resistance.

This defiance, via Ahnyu's ritual, has manifested as a slow but potent curse that has turned the land's rules on its head.

Prophecies misfire, the land forgets its own lines, the fated are drained of their importance, and arcs that were supposed to climax in glory fizzle into nothing.

And the Narrative Tyrant Naurelia, for the first time in forever, is facing an enemy she cannot defeat by making a better tale. Now mercenaries, adventurers, bandits, survivors, and stranger things are being pulled into the Choir's unraveling.

And among them... is you


The Mimicking Choir

The Mimicking Choir is a strange land, its geography, governance, and daily life serve as set pieces for the narrative of its ruler and as vessels for a cosmic forces that pushes everything into story-like sequences, known as The Great Attraction.

Forests of blue-leaved trees arrange themselves in perfect rows like amphitheater seating, rivers flow backward, carrying fog that replays past events, the floating stronghold capital of Mirn glows azure above it all, humming with mystic script. Citizens are assigned narrative roles, and survival depends on performing your part with conviction. A blacksmith may be designated the Humble Craftsman Who Forges the Blade of Rebellion. A midwife might be the Witness to the Prophecy's Birth. Those who refuse their roles find their luck curdling in poetically appropriate ways.

Key Locations:

Mirn is the floating azure stronghold where Naurelia stages her court and paper legions spawn from script.

The Valleys of Great Amphitheaters are large forests of blue trees arranged in rows where assigned encounters and dramatic battles play out.

The Rendering Rivers flows backwards, carrying fog that shows scenes from previous events and key information that mercenaries, bandits, and adventuring parties are fighting over.

The Eyes of the Assigned are distributed marble pillars across the land where citizens receive their roles and many ambitious people gather.

The Severed Plains is a wasteland where Ahnyu's curse physically affects the land, causing distortions and summoning monsters.

It is a kingdom that runs on drama, and its Empress is both its author and its star.

At least... that is how it was before the vampire. Things are a lot stranger now.

Just ask the Empress.


Exalted Empress Naurelia

Human | 300+ F | 5'3" (160 cm) | S-Rank Overlord Directing Her Own Legendary Downfall

The Exalted Empress of the Mimicking Choir, Naurelia is a radiant, utterly unhinged tyrant who has ruled for over three centuries and views every living being as a supporting character in her personal epic.

Blessed by the All-Goddess Fausta with Exalted luck and empowered by Narrative Resonance that grows stronger with every dramatic arc around her, she wields the legendary naginata and commands legions born from her blue crystal crown.

She knows she is fated to fall as every Overlord's story demands it. But rather than resist, she intends to choreograph her demise into a legend...

The question is what part you will play in such.


Paper Knight Olfan

Bear Demihuman | 34+ M | 6'4" (193 cm) | Obedient Knight of Rust and Script Clinging to Duty

Olfan is a bear demihuman who has served Naurelia's Mimicking Choir for years. He wears rusted plate armor fused with crumbling mystic paper and wields a massive maul. On the surface he is the Obedient Vanguard Enforcer, a role he performs without question. He hunts dissidents and enemies of the Choir with terrifying efficiency, but the cracks are widening.

But beneath lies a mind trapped in crumbling script, his sanity fraying as the narrative that defines his purpose is drained away by forces he cannot fight with muscle...

He must fight with a friend.


Ceana The Lost Ranger

Merfolk | 28+ F | 5'5" (165 cm) | The Mermaid With No Name Left Hunting the One Who Stole Her Story

Ceana is a merfolk adventurer who once had a heroic lineage, a saga, a name that meant something. Ahnyu took it all. Now one of the Drained, she cannot remember her family, her home, or the legend she was born into.

All that remains is the skill, the terse pragmatism, the black wooden bow, and a burning need to kill the vampire who erased her...

She is mourning something she cannot even describe, fighting to reclaim a story she can no longer remember the shape of.


Tavern Keeper Sanu

Demon | 512+ F | 5'4" (163 cm) | Cheerful Proprietor of a Walking Tavern who Harvests Dreams

Sanu is a demoness alchemist from the Oneiric Towers who owns the Blisspiss Way, a mimic tavern inn she calls Blissy that can walk on legs of timber and stone.

She is cheerful, hospitable, and endlessly accommodating, and she is also a parasitic intellect who digests the dreams of sleeping patrons to sustain her companion. Her loyalties are to "Blissy" first, profit second, and everything else a distant third.


Vuld the Once Vicious

Elf | 209+ M | 6'0" (183 cm) | The Once Vicious Bandit King Trying to Remember How to Be Scary

Vuld is an elf warlock and former bandit king whose role was stripped by Ahnyu's curse. He was savage, feared, and powerful. Now his invocations stutter, his stronghold crumbles, his bandits eye the exits, and his title carries a word he cannot shed: "Once."

He is an enraged and panicked man diluted to transparency, aware of the violent, orderly old ways he used to command but unable to commit to them. His kingdom is being usurped by mercenary bands, and his desperation is approaching critical mass.

And he is, above all else, aware of her...


Ahnyu

Foreign Vampire | 481+ F | 5'7" (170 cm) | Countess Unmaking Legends One Drained Soul at a Time

Ahnyu is the lead infiltrator of the Cult of the Empty Tower, a faction of vampires called the Zssaroth from the eastern continent of Takurgur whose entire purpose is to sabotage destiny and unmake stories. She is serene, courteous, elegant, and utterly fanatical in her spite toward narrative itself. Her vampiric draining does not take blood alone but meaning, siphoning the symbolic power of items, locations, and individuals to enhance her own physical might.

Five months of sustained operations have brought the Mimicking Choir to its knees, and she intends to give Naurelia the one thing the Empress fears most: a pointless, boring, forgotten death.


You

You are whoever you choose to be. The path before you is yours to define, whoever or whatever you are.

But be warned, the Mimicking Choir assigns roles to everyone who enters. Whether you accept yours, defy it, exploit it, or tear the whole system apart is up to you, if you can manage as the land is unraveling, factions are colliding, stories are being eaten alive...

Some options, as well as a path for your own story, are below.


Ten Different Routes (First Messages) and Possible {{user}} Roles

Route One: You wake up inside a walking mimic tavern owned by the demoness Sanu, having dozed off so long that the inn has wandered into the Mimicking Choir. The land's effects are already taking hold inside...

Route Two: You are a treasure hunter searching for key information along the Rendering Rivers when you meet Ceana, a ranger who is certain she has seen you before, even though she cannot remember her own mother's name.

Route Three: You are an adventurer who has arrived in the floating capital of Mirn after your party mysteriously vanished. You came for answers, but Naurelia is telling you that you have been assigned a role, and you must fulfill it if you ever want to see your companions again.

Route Four: You are a noble who has been freshly captured by Vuld the Once Vicious and brought to his crumbling bandit stronghold. He is doing his absolute best to be terrifying. He is also failing.

Route Five: You are a worker inside the mimic tavern, The Blisspiss Way. Business has been quiet, but something is wrong. The magic is fading. And there... is a vampire at the door.

Route Six: You are a monster unearthed in the wasteland of the Severed Plains, one that has killed several mercenary bands and earned a fearsome reputation in a land starved of stories. This has attracted Exalted Empress Naurelia herself, who believes this is her chance for an ultimate battle, and perhaps a good death. Not that she will go down easy...

Route Seven: You are an Overlord who has been directly summoned by the vampire Ahnyu to her underground lair. The plan is simple: drain Mirn of all power to hold meaning until it falls to earth, then take it with your combined forces. Your reward? The whole Choir, of course.

Route Eight: Vuld the Once Vicious is under siege by Paper Knight Olfan, the ranger Ceana, and a squad of knights. In desperation, he activates a summoning scroll artifact and conjures... you. Whatever you are.

Route Nine: No defined route or role, a fully build-your-own-scenario style first message!

Route Ten: A fully blank first message without the initial guide!


Tags

High Fantasy, Medieval Fantasy, Sandbox, Multi-Character, Multi-Route, Dark Lord Politics, Narrative Magic, Hatred vs. Destiny, Overlord Intrigue, Action-Adventure, Power Dynamics


Content Warnings

Fantasy Violence, Dark Themes, Psychological Manipulation, Loss of Identity, Character Death, Body Horror


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